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Find out what happens when nightmares become reality for Vicente, Shellie, and Chad! Will they outrun the police AND The Trio? And can they stop the Blood Debt before it strikes the city of Phoenix?
SPECIAL OFFER — IF YOU BUY PART ONE AND PART THREE EBOOKS THIS MONTH, I WILL SEND YOU PART TWO FOR FREE!! (Just send me a snapshot of your receipt and I will email your copy!)
Laura Richcreek-Morrison does it again! The Bleeding Crown joins Consequences Within Chaos on Audible.com. She continues the epic tale started with Consequences Within Chaos, this time the focus is on Princess Letandra.
Laura has an incredible range of character voices, along with her smooth but dramatic performances, they all come together to bring the worlds of Tayneva and Aberrisc to life! Her talents know no end! Check out her other work on Laura’s Voice: Voice Over Talent In The Fort Wayne Area.
Here’s a sample to whet your appetite: The Bleeding Crown Chapter 1 Sample
The Bleeding Crown:
Abducted by her family’s bitter rivals, spirited Princess Letandra finds herself stranded in a foreign land. Alone but confident a rescue will come at the hands of her brother, King Taihven, she focuses all her energy on surviving the unexpected trials she now faces.
But before he can save Letandra, she is captured by the sadistic Ebon Queen of the Quietus Dominion. Now, the princess must risk everything to escape and warn Taihven. War is coming not only for him, but the future of all hangs in the balance.
Just $13.97 or 1 credit with membership on Audible.com.
Hey there! I wanted to send out a quick update of items I’m working on currently and what you can expect to see from me in the future!
THE BLEEDING CROWN AUDIOBOOK will be available by the end of March or the first week of April! Laura Richcreek continues the saga and lends her incredible voice talents to bring the story alive. Literally over thirty different creature voices alone had to be crafted for the novel. Keep an eye out for free download giveaways!!
ELUDE PART THREE is finally written and going through a thorough wave of editing by my editors, Nesa Miller and Ted Barton. It will be produced by the end of March. This is the thrilling conclusion to the suspenseful Elude Series!
THE HIDDEN has also come to a stunning end and the last chapters will be published on this site in the next couple weeks! This horror origin story written with my father, T.D. Barton, will be available on both Amazon and Kindle by the middle of this year.
SWIMMING IN THE ASHES is still in the first draft process (over 26,000 words so far). I am going to delve into the book’s outline as I want to flesh out a few of the plot points I didn’t fully define yet before I continue with the writing. As I have proclaimed before, I am a “hard-nosed plotter” and I want to be sure I haven’t messed any events up!
EVADE will be a new Crime/Horror story I want to write which delves deeper into horror than the crime genre. Like ELUDE, it will also have ties to my Horror/Suspense novella IN FOUR DAYS. This time the story revolves around when the police find themselves on the receiving end of a high-speed car chase!
AFTER WYVERNSHIELD… I have been developing an idea and I hope to bring you another three-book series this time focusing on characters living in the wondrous lands of Aberrisc! How were their lives impacted by the events depicted in CONSEQUENCES WITHIN CHAOS, THE BLEEDING CROWN and SWIMMING IN THE ASHES? What has happened with the dark reign of the Quietus Dominion after the Ebon Queen Chroyanne?
AN UNTITLED NEW WEB SAGA in the works once THE HIDDEN has officially wrapped up. This will be an ongoing “Parallel Universe” story with a fascinating look at what happens when you meet the “other you”!
Yes, all this and I still have a full-time day job and a family with three children to help take care of!
Thanks to everyone who has supported and continues to help with my work, given me great ideas and feedback, and kept my spirits high through this epic journey!
And now on February 27th & February 28th YOU CAN GET A L L OF MY EBOOKS FREE ON AMAZON!!!
Indulge your dark curiosity and immerse yourself in a new shadowy universe…RISK-FREE.
Have you ever wanted to participate in a book’s story creation? Watched a movie and thought, I wish they would’ve have done this…or wished they would have taken the story in this direction…or This character is so flat, boring…
Well, I am offering you your chance!
In an upcoming modern horror/crime story I am developing, I want YOU to tell me what would you’d like to see or read — what character you’d write about!
My only limitation for you is that the story will focus on two patrol officers — I am picturing this character as my main character’s partner.
Should I chose your character, I will send you a Signed Paperback copy of the novel in advance of putting it on the market and give you exclusive credit on my dedication/acknowledgment page for that character creation! Also, you will get an exclusive paperback copy of Elude #3 coming out late March or April with an alternate cover…YOU WILL HAVE THE ONLY SIGNED COPY!
This giveaway will go to the end of March and you must be within the United States to win (sorry, but International Mailing is just impractical at this time). Also note, if not enough entries are sent or viable characters to choose from, I may not select a winner for the giveaway.
Use my prior Character Sketch blogs to get a better idea of what I am looking for:
Diving into the oceans of your characters!
OR…
CHARACTER SKETCH
Name —
Gender —
Character Strengths & Weaknesses ==
How old?
What does the character look like?
Where is the character from?
How does your character deal with conflict?
Where does he/she live?
Does the character have any unique or special abilities?
Who else is in their life?
The character’s current status in life?
What is your character’s goal or motivation?
To participate, Copy and Paste the questions to an email and send your responses to Rivyenphx@gmail.com. Feel free to add images, short summaries or anything else you want that will bring your creation to life!
Good luck and together we can really write something special!!
I have a small confession: this is actually the first book I have read from James Patterson. I know that he is an extremely prolific writer, but until recently I just did not have the opportunity to read much. I still don’t, but that is the beauty and power of buying audiobooks. It gives you the time to do other things like drive around for errands, vacuum the carpets, mop the floors, etc. Anyway, I am really glad I got a chance to read this one.
The Synopsis:
Never…
assume you know someone. Harry Blue is the top sex crimes investigator in her department. She’s a seasoned pro who’s seen it all. But even she didn’t see this coming: her own brother arrested for the grisly murders of three beautiful young women.
Never…
accept a reassignment to the middle of nowhere “for your own good”. Harry’s been sent to a makeshift town in a desolate landscape – a world full of easy money, plenty of illegal ways to spend it, and a ragtag collection of transient characters who thrive on the fringes of society. A place where little grows but evil flourishes.
Never…
trust anyone. Looking into a seemingly simple missing persons case, Harry’s been assigned to a new “partner”. But is he actually meant to be a watchdog? Still reeling from the accusations against her brother, Harry can’t trust even her own instincts, which she’s never doubted…until now.
Never…
go anywhere without leaving a trace. Far from the world she knows and desperate to clear her brother’s name, Harry has to mine the dark secrets of her strange new home for answers to a deepening mystery – before she vanishes in a place where no one would ever think to look for her.
Never Never is an edge-of-your-seat thrill ride with enough intrigue and suspense to keep you guessing until the final minute. You’ll never be able to turn it off.
The Review:
While I thought the hook of a sex crime detective not knowing her own brother was a serial killer was intriguing, the main story arch for the novel turned out pretty engaging as well. The uranium mine setting was unique, but from other articles that I have read, the details of its size and population were farfetched and very inaccurate.
The story revolves mainly around the hard-as-nails female detective, Harriet Blue and how she perseveres with the stress of her brother being arrested then portrayed as a sexual serial killer all over the media.
While this should have been the main storyline, instead it is the story of her investigating missing miners in this uranium mine in the middle of nowhere. I liked the storyline, but it did feel a little “bait-and-switch”. Another complaint would be that it was never clear in my mind — the locale was not fully painted in my mind.
The characters are complex and varied. Harry’s personality, though, was too mixed for me. One moment strong and feisty, next confused and weak. I would like her depiction one way or the other. On top of it, she was a horrible judge of character ESPECIALLY FOR A DETECTIVE! HA!
Intense action sequences, good dialogue as well as some unpredictable plot twists certainly makes this a fun read. I will be getting the next novel in the Harriet Blue Book Series.
The Narration:
Federay Holmes — Here I usually include a picture of the voice actor, however, there were none to be found anywhere on Amazon, Kindle, IMDB or Audible.com. Not sure why no images exist.
Born in March 1968 in Australia as Sarah Federay Holmes.
She’s listed on IMDB.com as a bit role actress known for television shows New Tricks (2014), The Widower (2013), and Oranges and Sunshine (2010).
She did a great job on this project and her British accent definitely added to the Australian atmosphere of the novel. I would say her performance is one of the main reasons I liked the novel. Ms. Holmes has over a dozen different novels to her credit including Me Without You, Like A House On Fire, and The Devil’s Staircase.
The Rating:
Some flaws which I am willing to overlook as I liked the story and characters and want to know just what is the story around brother… I would RECOMMEND this series starter novel.
With lots of willpower and a dash of good luck, I will be completing the two series, Wyvernshield and Elude, this year. So, with that said, I am deciding on future projects.
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As everyone who happens to read these blogs know, I have been using Bi-Monthly goals to keep me focused, motivated and productive. Now since November, I have been a little non-plussed, to be honest with you. With very little book sales and only a few friends coming to book shows, it has made me question what to do next or what changes I can make to reach a bigger audience. I am not planning on giving up, just looking for new steps to take.
While I am still researching the internet and watching YouTube videos on marketing, I don’t have any new answers…yet, but in the meantime, I thought I would look back and see just what I have done this year and if I am happy or not with 2018.
CONSEQUENCES WITHIN CHAOS AUDIOBOOK – This was still in the works, finalizing edits and mastering the audio quality. The final version was released and published on Audible.com on June 25. This was a fantastic first experience with audiobook production and I couldn’t be happier with the talent and skill my voice actress, Laura Richcreek-Morrison. She has been currently working on The Bleeding Crown! Voice actors like Laura and Charles Pendleton for my horror stories have taken my work to a whole new level!
THE BLEEDING CROWN – Four of my bi-monthly goals for January & February were to complete the 2nd waves of edit for the main body of work, complete the subplots for the manuscript (about 25,000 words), set up a marketing campaign (ads, etc) and start working on the book cover. All was finalized and the completed book was published on June 26th. (Side note: I didn’t realize June had been so full this year! ha). While sales have not been as plentiful, it has gotten a decent amount of 5 Star Reviews on Amazon. I personally cherish the book as my favorite child so far (Elude is close second though!). I have written almost 30,000 so far on the follow-up, Swimming In The Ashes (working title). That might be out by the end of 2019, but no guarantees.
IN FOUR DAYS AUDIOBOOK – In April, I connected with Charles Pendleton and we agreed to work together on my modern paranormal/horror story. He did a great job on it and we have seen some success with the sales on Audible. It was released in August. Charles is also already working with me on the Elude series so stay tuned for that!
ELUDE PT #1 & PT #2 – In January I was still working on the first wave of edits for Part One! As of August 31, it has been completed and published on Amazon and Kindle. Part Two was published on October 19th. I am working through the final Part Three and hope to have it published by February 2019.
THE HIDDEN – Released Chapter 7 on January 2nd. Just this month released Chapter 23. This series looks to be wrapping up in a couple months as a complete web saga. We, my father and I, will be working to get this put together and finalized for print within the upcoming year. I have been developing several book cover ideas to start with.
Now to see some stats on the site’s growth:
4,239 Views in the three years!
New Additions to the Site were my Audible book reviews posts and my book giveaways which has been very successful.
So, overall a lot of work still hadn’t been published until the fall of this year — three books and two audiobook versions. I hope to have two more audiobook versions out and possibly two more novels. I have also had ideas percolating in the back of my mind for a new horror web saga for this site and a whole new trio of novels starting in Aberissc this time! What I am saying is that there is a lot more work to be done and coming. 🙂
I also had a chance to get out and meet a few of you that were local at the book-signings in October, November and December. That was a lot of fun and I do hope to continue this in the coming year. On January 19th, come see me at:
While I didn’t get everything done that I wanted to and I am still trying to find the right balance to get writing, work and fitness goals accomplished, I do see that the platform is actually growing. Also, I should be fully recovered from my back injuries from the accident in August by mid-2019, so that should also help with my fitness.
Thanks especially to all that do support me and have taken an interest in my work. I hope to keep bringing a smile to your face as you do mine!
As I have stated in the past, Stephen King was and still is a big influence on my writing. When he published a fantasy novel in the 80s, I had to read it as fantasy was also one of my favorite genres. I liked it, of course, back then, but I was only 17 at the time. So, when I ran across the title a couple weeks ago, I found surprising that I could not remember anything about it. I anxiously bought the audiobook as I had to see if the story still had the “same ol’ magic”. Yeah, I know, pun and bad joke intended!
The Synopsis:
“Once, in a kingdom called Delain, there was a king with two sons….”
Thus begins one of the most unique tales that master storyteller Stephen King has ever written—a sprawling fantasy of dark magic and the struggle for absolute power that utterly transforms the destinies of two brothers born into royalty. Through this enthralling masterpiece of mythical adventure, intrigue, and terror, you will thrill to this unforgettable narrative filled with relentless, wicked enchantment, and the most terrible of secrets….
The Review:
One of the best things that King does in any of his novels is to draw you in by creating fascinating and yet relatable characters. All of the story’s characters are very well developed and dynamic. Many in the plot have their own agendas as well as their own drives. The way he weaves the arch of the story at the same time illuminating the lives of the two princes keeps you glued to the intrigue that they find themselves caught up within.
There is a theory that all of Stephen King’s novels are connected in some fashion. One of the more notable lynchpins is his infamous villain, Flagg. Here he appears as the Court Wizard and King Roland’s closest counsel. In the novel, The Stand, readers should recall in the post-apocalypse world, the evil entity known as Randall Flagg. There is even a popular theory that the malicious, shape-changing clown in IT is really Flagg. Just as Flagg did in these other stories, he creates blood-filled chaos and death wherever he treads.
The “hero’s journey” and the road to vindication that Prince Peter has to take is a great read and thrilling adventure. And yes, there are horror elements in the tale and some dark parts that are classic Stephen King, but I did very much enjoy this fantasy tale once again and would highly recommend it.
The Narration:
Bronson Pinchot, a seasoned television and movie actor gives a fantastic rendition and his range of voices is very impressive. The whispery voice of Flagg that he uses actually made goosebumps on my skin the first time I heard it, capturing the “seething evil under the surface” aspect of Flagg perfectly.
While widely known as the quirky actor from 80’s sitcom, Perfect Strangers, he has also gone on to do films (including a breakout performance as the psychotic Craig Toomy in the Stephen King film, The Langoliers) and several Broadway plays in New York City.
Other narrated books to his Pinchot’s credit are One Year After: A John Matherson Novel and The Extinction Cycle.
The Rating:
Five Stars as this story has intricate plotting, detailed characters, and exciting scenes (one of the best scenes especially is when Prince Thomas spies on his father when he is drunk and very enraged. King Roland screams at the mounted trophy heads on his wall, screaming “WHY DO YOU STARE AT ME SO? WHY? I HAVE DONE THE BEST I CAN.”) HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!
By Derek Barton — Author of Dark Fantasy novels: Consequences Within Chaos and The Bleeding Crown. Also the author or In Four Days: a Horror-Suspense Novella and the series Elude: Part One & Part Two (horror/crime thrillers)!!
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