An Exciting New Story – ECLIPSE — Derek Barton, 2024

Are you missing out? Never too late to join in! ECLIPSE is my latest horror-suspense story I am sharing on Amazon Vella. It’s another crime-inspired story, connected with my prior stories, Elude and Evade!

A sadistic new serial killer has the city of Chicago in his grip. A bold, rookie detective haunts his every step. Which will slip up first?

One criticism I want to address: a common trait in my stories is the supernatural or occult aspects. Some readers want a hard-core, true-to-life crime thriller. ECLIPSE is just for YOU! This time I bring you pure horror with nothing but the evil of man… Are you sure you are ready for this?

And to add a little spice to the hook: the rookie detective is Bowden Korrey… nephew to none other than Detective Lindsey Korrey from Evade…

Here’s a sample of the first episode:


The storm outside also grew in strength and fury as if feeding off Mitchellโ€™s mood. Now, blinding flurries of fresh snow pelted the windows incessantly. Mitchell took a long sip of his coffee, settled back in his chair, and worked to calm his nerves. Corey was a typical kid. It was nothing abnormal. Yet there was something about the mouthy teen that got under his skin. He was expected to do well in a college football program somewhere as a running back. For that reason, he barely made any effort with his assignments and tests.

The plain digital clock on his wall displayed 12:45. He had to heed his own advice and started to gather his papers and texts into his work duffel bag. A few minutes later, he jogged with his hands up over his head to shield himself from the snow as he opened his gold Toyota Camry. He flung his bag in the backseat and waited behind the steering wheel.

A few minutes later, he cruised down the I-83, keeping it slow and steady on the slick roadway. He dug out his cell phone. He knew it would be better to call now versus when he reached the woody outskirts of Chicago. Cell towers were not as prevalent and his reception grew spotty. Despite the long everyday drive to and from Bogan, he loved the time of isolation and freedom it gave him. He would often listen to classical music or even lose himself in an audiobook.

Sometimes when the mood took him, he would allow himself a fantasy. A homicide fantasy would bloom in his mind, like a black and thorny rose. He would spin the encounter in his mind in every gruesome detail and direction he could. Mitchell liked to work out the opportunities, challenges, and the obstacles. He conjured every conceivable angle to how he would kill a person in the scenario. It was his darkest craving. He buried the needy feelings deep inside… buried deep like his victims in his scenarios.

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The Phoenix Oasis Press — Author Interview – Derek Barton – 2024

I was honored to be interviewed by a local publishing press, Phoenix Oasis Press. This small, but growing press has been doing great work by producing an online blog focused on helping new authors, organizing workshops and writer retreats, and even orchestrating several award-winning anthologies.

In 2025, they are again set to gather independent writer’s short stories into a new anthology. I have attached the link to the details here. Without a doubt, it is a great venture for any new, aspiring writers!

Here is a sample of the interview (for the full interview, click on the link at the bottom).

Why I write

I love getting lost in books. The great escape into space, the past, the future โ€“ anywhere the story takes you. I knew early on I wanted to entertain others in the same way. And I had a wealth of content. You see, stories and characters spring to my mind and demand to be heard and written. Like spoiled children, they rampage and stomp out any other thoughts until I write down what they have to say. If I donโ€™t give in to their demands, Iโ€™ll go crazy. 

I wouldnโ€™t have it any other way. Writing has always been a part of who I am. Bringing stories to life is a beautiful stress reliever, therapy session, and personal adventure. Sometimes the characters go on unexpected benders or take unknown paths. Itโ€™s intriguing, fulfilling, and frustrating all at the same time. 

Early roots & inspirations

Born and raised in Indiana, I was your typical introverted kid. I spent a lot of time reading the horror of Stephen King and Dean Koontz, and R.A. Salvatoreโ€™s fantasy epics.

When I was 26, I needed a big change. I took a leap and moved to Phoenix, Arizona in 1996. I didnโ€™t know anyone in the southwest. Nor did I have a job or a place to stay, but something was calling me. 

Writing life

In 2011 I got serious about writing and started working on my debut novel, an epic fantasy. When I started, I wrote by the seat of my pants. I let the world unfold on screen as I typed. My story meandered along, trying to find its way from point to point. I realized I needed a road map so I sat down and crafted a super-detailed, 60-page bullet outline. Turns out Iโ€™m more a plotter style writer than a pantser

Editorโ€™s tip: Thereโ€™s no right way to write a novel other than the way that works for you. The pantster-plotter spectrum also includes plantsers. Check out this NaNoWriMo quiz to get an idea of your style.

Letting the story go

I spent five years developing, editing, and endlessly rewriting that first novel. Then I read an article where Stephen King advised that at a certain point, you have to let your children go. You have to let them loose in the world and hope for the best. I took that advice to heart. If I kept rewriting, my work would never see the light of day. 

Publication choices

When I started, I hadnโ€™t thought about what exactly Iโ€™d do with it once it was done. I always knew I wanted to publish it, to share it, but I hadnโ€™t considered whether to go with traditional or independent publishing. 

As I worked on editing, cover design, and my book blurb, I jumped into researching about all-things-publishing. Two years later, I independently published my epic fantasy Consequences Within Chaos. I went independent because I felt I had better control of the end product, along with more responsibility. Iโ€™d invested a total of five years of blood, sweat, and tears into realizing this dream. 

Things got easier

I wrote The Bleeding Crown, the sequel to Consequences, in one year. I hope that helps anyone reading this realize the value of the work you are doing right now, every day. Everything you learn, everything you do, helps you develop repeatable processes for your writing that make it easier. Trust me. 

Since then, Iโ€™ve produced eight horror novels, six epic fantasy novels, a short story collection, and have been published in literary magazines. My newest short story collection just came out, and I have an epic fantasy novel launching soon. You can find everything about my work on my website where I also blog about writing topics. You can also find my works on Amazon under my author page.

For the rest of my interview…

Enjoy!! And thank you to everyone who has shown interest and have supported my writing career since 2016! It’s been incredible and it isn’t over yet!!

New Releases for 2024! โ€” Derek Barton – 2024

New releases coming at yaโ€ฆ

Things are heating up for me as they are cooling down outside! Several projects have come together and I wanted to let you all know.

Starting with this month, VICTIMS: A Horror Short Story Collection will be available starting 9/11/24. This is a combined effort by me, one of my best friends Brian Gatti, and my father, T. D. Barton. We have fifteen thrilling and mind-bending stories of paranormal, psychological, and occult horror. Soon this will also be available to listen to on Audible.com from the incredibly talented S.W. Salzman (who also narrated my best-selling Elude Series!).

Then on October 15th, just in time for your creepy Fall nights and Halloween reading: Weatherly Lane: An Anthology will be released! This is an ensemble of new and rising stars of indie horror writers. The anthology revolves around the deadly cursed house built on 1417 Weatherly Lane in Kingston, Minnesota. The stories explore the dark events that circled this property from the day it was built in 1914 up through present day! Every author has chosen a year or decade to represent. My story contribution is the origin to the evil that permeates the tainted land in 1911! It a fun and entertaining thrill ride from page one!!!

Also by the end of September or the beginning of October, I will be releasing a brand new horror story line on Amazon Vella called Eclipse! And yes, there are ties to the Elude & Evade Series!

Mitch Michaels is a respected teacher, a well-liked pillar of the community, and a committed fiancรฉ set to marry in January. But after a devastating car accident causes brain trauma, something has been unleashed. Something evil. Something primal! Mitch is hiding dark cravings, promises of chaos and terror. How long can he hide inside his โ€œgentle giantโ€ persona while giving into his dark activitiesโ€ฆ

More details will be made as I get closer to releasing this story so stay alert for that!

And in December, Iโ€™m working hard to make available my epic fantasy Wyvernshield finale, Beyond the Barrier. Iโ€™m now in the last stages of editing. The story and the culmination of five books is finally here! An incredible epic tale with an epic battle unlike any Iโ€™ve ever written!

More stories are brewing! Iโ€™m even considering an epic fantasy anthology that takes place after the events from Beyond the Barrier!

Plus, I still have an interest in doing my first whodunit mystery novel next year!

Thanks again to everyone who support my work or who actively helps to make this all happen!

Audible Book Review of Stephen Kingโ€™s โ€œYou Like It Darkerโ€ โ€” Derek Barton โ€“ย 2024

You Like It Darker

by Stephen King โ€” a short story anthology

Released on May 21, 2024

512 pages

Synopsis:

From legendary storyteller and master of short fiction Stephen King comes an extraordinary new collection of twelve short stories, many never-before-published, and some of his best EVER.

โ€œYou like it darker? Fine, so do I,โ€ย writes Stephen King in the afterword to this magnificent new collection of twelve stories that delve into the darker part of lifeโ€”both metaphorical and literal. King has, for half a century, been a master of the form, and these stories, about fate, mortality, luck, and the folds in reality where anything can happen, are as rich and riveting as his novels, both weighty in theme and a huge pleasure to read. King writes to feel โ€œthe exhilaration of leaving ordinary day-to-day life behind,โ€ and inย You Like It Darker, readers will feel that exhilaration too, again and again.

The Review:

Stephen King has given us a long list of intriguing, unique, and breath-taking short stories like in Skeleton Crew (The Mist), Different Seasons (Rita Hayworth and the Shawshank Redemption), Everything’s Eventual (1408), and, of course, Night Shift (Children of the Corn, Trucks).

In this collection, he showcases several amazing character profile stories like Two Talented Bastids, Laurie, and The Turbulence Expert. These stories revolve around dynamic characters – King gives you small glimpses into their lives and leaves you wanting more!

The three stories that make the collection truly shine are: Danny Coughlin’s Bad Dream, Rattlesnakes, and The Answer Man.

Danny Coughlin’s Bad Dream will surely be made into another movie — it’s that good! So, I won’t give you too much on this one. Let’s just say, what would happen if you were gifted one psychic vision one night… You see a possible murder. How do you get anyone to believe you?

Rattlesnakes may not be a movie, but it gives you some closure. Ever wonder what happened to the surviving parents from Cujo? This details the remainder of their lives along the way giving a gripping ghost story!

The Answer Man is a fun read! Truly entertaining with a fantastic mystery hook. If you were to meet The Answer Man, what would be your “free” questions for him? Be very careful of the words you choose and be sure you truly want to know the answers!

The Narration:

Patton

Will Patton has been chosen again to work his magic and narrate the majority of the stories. He is a successful actor in movies likeย Armageddon, The Postmanย andย The Punisherย as well as recurring roles in the television series,ย Falling Skiesย andย 24. His versatility and talent comes to life in his narration, bringing these stories to a whole new level. Stephen King does a good job himself, narrating two of the stories himself, Laurie and The Turbulence Expert.

The Rating:

I originally was disappointed with the first three stories of this collection to be honest. I began to doubt the book was going to win me over. The first three stories were… interesting. Good, but as I pointed out, some of them were character showcases.

When you get a title like You Like It Darker, you have some high horror expectations. That being the case, only Rattlesnakes got under my skin. The stalking Twins and the creep factor brought to the story worked for me. I am a sucker for ghost stories as it is, so Rattlesnakes was my favorite in terms of scare factor. The Dreamers and “the floating, black tendrils” was second for making my skin crawl.

Hands down my favorite was Danny Coughlin’s Bad Dream. It places you in the heart of a mystery at the same time drawing you into an “injustice against an innocent man” scenario. The Inspector Franklin Jalbert character is an expose on obsessive men who can go blind to truth and logic. Men who bend the truth or fix evidence as they feel the ends justify the means. Deplorable character but fascinating at the same time!

Overall, I did like this collection. It has a misleading title, but the true gems in the material make it possible to forgive.

RECOMMENDED READING! For rating purposes, I score this 4 of 5.

Byย DEREK BARTONย โ€” Author of the ELUDE series (Parts I, II & III โ€” a Horror/crime thriller), EVADE Series (Parts I, II & III)ย  & IN FOUR DAYS: a Horror-Suspense Novella.ย  Also co-author of the Hidden & The Hidden Within… All books available on amazon, kindle & Audible.com!).

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Updated & Upgraded Patreon — Derek Barton – 2024

Hey everyone! I really hope you will take a moment to check out my Patreon page. I have revised my Membership Benefits. I will be making one or two blog posts on there a month along with my author website here.

Iโ€™ve always been interested in writing and telling stories, butย LIFE HAPPENSย to us all. I didnโ€™t pursue my calling until after I was 40 and buried in a corporate job. Currently, I work a graveyard shift job and have a very lively family of five that I want to give all the best that life can offer.

What your patronage will provide for me is funding for any marketing campaigns (Amazon ads, Facebook ads, Youtube Book Trailers, or professional book cover artwork). While I do this for the love of storytelling, I also would love to reach more readers. OVER 2000+ NEW BOOKS ARE PUBLISHED EVERY DAY!! The only way to stand out from the avalanche is through ads and videos.

Recently on my monthly newsletter, I created a survey of what you guys wanted and what you are looking to see from me. You guys spoke up, and I took note!ย You want MORE: more writing, more updates on works-in-progress, and more unique prizes!

I love this idea of having this personal connection with you, my core fans. And with this direct connection, we can literally provide for one another.

Besides my utmost gratitude, subscription memberships will benefit you too!

Starting at Tier 1 @ $1 per month, you can engage in surveys and votes to influence content decisions (like names, titles, cover art, etc), exclusive insights to my work and sneak peeks at content, plus you are recognized and named on my website!

Tier 2 @ $3 per month, you gain the same as Tier 1 BUT also you can make suggestions for blogs or short stories you’d like to see from me, see monthly updates on WIPs, a special Thank You Credit in my novels!ย 

Tier 3 @ $10 per month gives you the previously listed along with Ebook copies of new novels, the patronโ€™s site link(if available) listed on my website, and a choice of a signed custom-designed metal bookmarker!

SPECIAL SHOUT OUT TO JOE GIBBS FOR HIS MEMBERSHIP.

Tier 4 @ $20 per month, gives you the previously listed as well as paperback copies of any new novels released (US only) mailed directly to you.

SPECIAL SHOUT OUT TO LONG-STANDING MEMBERS SUSANNA WILLEY AND LYNN NEITH!

The las Tier 5 @ $35 per month gives you the previously listed and a unique COLLECTIBE book cover of new release custom-designed by the author just for the Patron member (US only). PLUSย an ongoing chapter-by-chapter submission of a new novel sent to you before it even goes to publication!

With Patreon, I can realize my goals with marketing, doing book signings, offering contests and giveaways at the same time bringing you great exclusive content and special signed prizes!

With Patreon, I can focus on my ultimate goal to be a full-time writer.

With Patreon,ย together we can really create something magical (or horrific depending on the genre!) and make a true difference!

NOW LETโ€™S GET THE JOURNEY STARTED!!

Fresh Content – THE LONG STRETCH (rough draft) โ€” Derek Barton – 5/24/2024

Kris woke with a start. Bright lights above him stung his eyes. His mouth was sand dry and his throat felt swollen. As his vision adapted, he looked about him. He was behind the steering wheel in his dark blue Thunderbird. It was smoothly running idle. 

He checked the rearview mirror. His short-cropped platinum blonde hair was still well-groomed and nothing seemed out of place. However, his slate-gray eyes were bloodshot and red-rimmed. He looked down at his light blue suit. It was relatively fresh and he didnโ€™t note any wrinkles. He decided he hadnโ€™t been asleep long. 

Outside the car, he could see a long empty stretch of road.

Oh, itโ€™s the tunnel! The I-21, Kris realized. It was what the locals in Clear Lake, Texas, called The Long Stretch. The tunnel was on his normal drive to work. He had recently been promoted to Operations Manager of a Healthcare Plan Center. The commute normally took about thirty-five minutes, most of it in this tunnel.

God! I fell asleep. How the hell did I manage to do that? he wondered. 

He also found it odd that he couldnโ€™t recall the night before. Was he drinking? He hadnโ€™t had a black-out session in sometime but it wasnโ€™t off the table. His love of Bourbon was infamous. Sherry, his wife despised his โ€œonly viceโ€ and gave him a shit storm routinely over it.

He shrugged and put the car in Drive. There was no other traffic in front or behind him in the tunnel. His watch was missing, but he guessed it was near 5:00 AM. He found himself quite hungry and thirsty. The BP Gas Station near the office would likely have some hot coffee and maybe a few donuts.

Kris patted his suit pants pockets, but they were empty. Shitty time to lose his wallet and cell phone. He sighed getting disgusted with himself. It mustโ€™ve been a real party for him to walk out without his items. 

Did I party? Or did Sherry and I fight again and I drank away my anger? Why the hell was this drive taking so long? Whereโ€™s the exit? His thoughts began to focus on the tunnel.

While he had driven inside it nearly twenty times this month alone, there were no details he could really recall. It was constructed with a plain, black tar road, three wide lanes, yellow painted stripes to mark the sides, a bike lane, and high gray concrete walls with white hanging LED lamps every thirty feet. 

The tunnel went on and on. 

Somethingโ€™s wrong. The tunnel portion of the drive  is only twenty minutes or so tops. Iโ€™ve been over a half hour already I think.

He looked at the odometer. Christ! It was way more than he remembered. 56312. Maybe a good four or five hundred more miles than he would have guessed. 

Was it a road trip and an end-all be-all drinkfest? What the fuck? Sherry is going to tear me a new one when I get home tonight. He shook his head. Then he realized he wasnโ€™t hung over either. He didnโ€™t even have a headache. His thoughts though were a bit foggy.

After driving for an hour, he pulled to the side and parked in the bike lane. He punched the Hazard lights on.

He then opened the glove compartment looking for his phone. In it, stuffed in the left side was a silver flip phone, maybe one of the old Motorola ones. It was not his IPhone 13. There was nothing else in the compartment. His registration paperwork and insurance papers were all missing.

He retrieved the phone and examined it. It was fully charged, had the current time of 3:52 AM on it as well as the date 9/18/2029, but nothing else on the display. There were no contacts listed. He checked the history and only one listed number that had been called. It wasnโ€™t familiar,but he dialed it anyway.

It rang three times before am automated robotic voice answered. โ€œKristopher Anthony Todd. Pending. 23 days.โ€

It disconnected without even prompting him to leave a voicemail message. 

Pending what? And what did it mean by 23 days? 

Starting to feel anxious and his temper beginning to boil, he again put the car in Drive. It was time to find the freaking exit!

Another hour passed in The Long Stretch. Kris swore the ceiling was lowering and the lanes were getting narrower. His world was crushing in on him. When the odometer hit 56412 โ€” another hundred miles since he first checked, he hit the brakes and screamed in helplessness. He pounded his fists on the dash so hard a crack suddenly formed and split the smooth rubbery surface.

โ€œGoddamn it! Where am โ€”โ€œ

A flash of memory cut his thoughts off. Sherry was next to the dresser in their master bedroom. She was standing in a pink and purple pajama top and panties. He was coming out of the bathroom, shouting and stumbling. He was very drunk. His shirt was unbuttoned and had fresh drink stains. She was screaming, โ€œI am sick of your lies!โ€ 

He had screamed, โ€œShut that bitch mouth!โ€ right before he swung wildly and punched her. She flew back sprawled across the bed.

Guilt and shame washed over his features. So they did fight. He did get drunk and thatโ€™s why he could not remember. 

Yet something nagged at him. The memory seemed distant. Wasnโ€™t that months ago, he questioned himself. 

Kris pressed hard on the gas pedal. No one was around so he got close to 110 on the speedometer. He was going to get to the damn exit and he was going to get there now!

An hour and a half passed. Nothing of the tunnel had changed. No other cars appeared. He was starting to question whether he even woke that morning. Started to question his sanity.

Eventually, the Thunderbird sputtered then stalled as it ran out of battery power. He opened the door and walked in front of the car with his hands on his hips as he tried to figure what to do next.

The dent is gone! His inner voice  shouted at him. This wasnโ€™t his car after all! Just the same make and model. He looked at the key fob and popped the trunk. Inside was an interesting trove of items. There was a package of bottled water next to a rolled up sleeping bag. A camouflaged backpack had food stuffs and a copy of The Green Mile by Stephen King which happened to be one of his favorite novels. 

โ€œWell we have everything we need, Dorothy. Letโ€™s follow that yellow brick road after all!โ€

Kris took the items and as many of the water bottles he could cram in the sleeping bag and backpack.

Another instant vision exploded inside his mind. Sherry was in the backyard running. The side of her face and neck were bleeding profusely from deep slashes. He was also running, covered in blood. 

The blood was not his.

He stood there shaking. The nightmare memory hitting him hard at his core. โ€œWhat did I do, babe? Oh Godโ€ฆโ€

He started walking again trying to clear his thoughts of the vision.

Kris struck his palm against his temple. He could call for help with the flip phone!

He dialed their house, praying she was alright and could answer the phone. Another robotic voice answered instead.

โ€œThe phone number you have dialed is invalid. Please checkโ€”โ€œ 

Kris hung up, cursing and muttering under his breath. He dialed his work. 

โ€œThe phone number you have dialedโ€”โ€œ 

Dialed his mother.

โ€œTheโ€”โ€œ

How about this? He punched in 9 1 1.

โ€œThe phone number you have dialed is invalid. Please check your number and try again.โ€

Sighing loudly, he called the only number that seemed to work. The robotic message came back on again.   

โ€œKristopher Anthony Todd. Pending. 39 days.โ€

Kris scoffed. He had no idea what it all meant. He continued his hike. 

At one point, he stopped and camped in the bike lane. He slept five hours on the cold tarmac, but the sleep was filled with chaotic, frantic dreams.

The infinite road went on and on. His feet blistered from the dress shoes. He ditched his suit jacket and his blue tie. 

Seven hours later he made another stop to sleep. The cell phone told him โ€œโ€œKristopher Anthony Todd. Pending. 47 days.โ€ 

At 4:12 PM the next day, he spotted something new! It was at first only a dark and square object. When he walked closer he realized it was the same car he abandoned. The trunk was still wide open. 

Kris sank to his knees, broken and exhausted. How was this happening? Why was this happening? What doโ€”

A tall slender man opened the driverโ€™s door and climbed out. He wore a blue jumpsuit with a black leather belt. Under a police officerโ€™s hat, the light-skinned man had on large reflecting sunglasses. His face had almost no clear shapes or details. He was blocky, similar to one of those people his nephew would make in his Minecraft video games. However, in the manโ€™s right hand, he carried a black pistol.

Kris lunged and  bolted back down the roadway. He pulled out the cell again.

He dialed by reflex 9 1 1.

An actual human answered this time. A serious but pleasant female voice said, โ€œState the nature of your emergency please.โ€

โ€œPlease! Please help me,โ€ he shouted, panting from his exertion. 

โ€œState the nature of your emergency please.โ€

โ€œIโ€™m being chased. He has a gun! I donโ€™t know why or where I am!โ€

โ€œPrisoner 56312, Kristopher Anthony Todd. Sentenced into CRIOSYS 65 days ago. Final appeal DENIED. Your execution date has been approved and moved to today 9/18/2029. Please remain still.โ€

โ€œFUCK YOU, LADY!โ€ He screamed back and threw the phone hard to the ground. 

The past year of arrest, court, press conferences,  prison, images of Sherryโ€™s corpse โ€” all rushed back to him. He had been charged and sentenced to die for killing his wife, Sherry Diane Todd almost a year ago. On Death Row, he had been forced into a new experimental AI-generated prison called CRIOSYS. 

Kris didnโ€™t care about anything at that moment. He only ran. He knew he had to. His body may be lying in some cold storage, but his mind and soul were here in The Long Stretch! In order to live again, he couldnโ€™t stop running. He wouldnโ€™t!

The eruption of the gun, two blasts, the shock of the sounds, and the agonizing bloody holes opening in his chest struck him all at once. 

Kristopher Anthony Todd was no longer Pending.

New Custom-made Bookmarkers Are Now Available! — Derek Barton, 2024

Hey Everyone! I just wanted to reach out real quick and let you know I have these beauties right here, ready to sign and mail upon request!

These metal bookmarkers are personally designed by me, have a brilliant pearl finish, and have vivid colors that leap right out at you.

I will be setting these up on the website, but don’t miss your chance now for an early-bird special of $5. Each will be signed and mailed directly to you!

By May 15th, the price will go back to their normal costs of $7 each.

Also pictured below are older, alternative bookcover metal bookmarkers. These are $4.

To order any of these, please EMAIL ME AT RIVYENPHX@GMAIL.COM (and include the bookmarkers of your choice and quantity!)

I am also working hard to get “collector boxes” for fans, holiday surprise gifts or a pick-me-up present for someone who is sick and wants something amazing to read! These boxes will contain the epic fantasy novel series (Wyvernshield #1 through #4) or they will keep the terror within and house the Evade and Elude Horror-suspense novels! I will of course find extras to put in like T-shirts, these metal bookmarks and maybe even some signed metal prints of my bookcovers! Price and quantity for these have yet to be determined but keep an eye out!! They will be here around the corner!!

If you have any ideas or suggestions you would like to see included in the Collector Boxes, please comment or feel free to email me!

Beneath The Skin: A Character sketch — Derek Barton – 2024

Today, I wanted to post a little behind-the-scenes work I am doing. It will give you some insight into the research work I do to develop my characters and my storylines.

I usually start with a vague idea or an impression in my mind then I build upon that spark by asking myself questions and finding information online.

For this story (which will be in the sequel anthology for Weatherly Lane), it will revolve around the true-life serial killer known as The Axeman of New Orleans.

Very little is known of the infamous murderer. He was rarely seen and few who survived his attacks to give any credible accounting to the investigators. His reign of terror focused on the city of New Orleans from May, 1918 to October, 1919. Overall, the Axeman is accredited with twelve victims of which six people died.

Like the modern-day serial killer, The Zodiac Killer, the Axeman grew notorious as he sent a taunting letter to the investigators and mocked their efforts at capturing him. He made an odd request: if everyone in the city on March 19th would play jazz music, he would spare them another murder. It was reported on that night, many bars and nightclubs only played jazz. There were no more murders until August of 1919. To this day, on March 19th, some establishments still play only jazz. His last murder was in October of 1919. And like the Zodiac, he disappeared into obscurity, no more attacks occurred, and he was never captured.

Here is a sample of the letter he wrote to the police:

Hell, March 13, 1919

Esteemed Mortal:

They have never caught me, and they never will. They have never seen me, for I am invisible, even as the ether surrounding your earth. I am not a human being but a spirit and a demon from the hottest hell. I am what you Orleanians and your foolish police call the Axeman.

When I see fit, I shall come and claim other victims. I alone know whom they shall be. I shall leave no clue except my bloody axe, besmeared with blood and brains of he whom I have sent below to keep me company.

If you wish, you may tell the police to be careful not to rile me. Of course, I am a reasonable spirit. I take no offense at the way they have conducted their investigations in the past. In fact, they have been so utterly stupid as to not only amuse me but His Satanic Majesty, Francis Josef, etc. But tell them to beware. Let them not try to discover what I am, for it was better that they were never born than to incur the wrath of the Axeman...

Often I like to delve into the backstory of my main character to better get to know him or her. If I know the character well, then I can write their dialogue or their decisions with better clarity and authenticity. Sometimes I include some of the backstory in my main story, sometimes I leave it out maybe for future work.

My story is of course fictional. The information I provide here is completely conjecture and invented for story purposes. In other words, I have not done any real investigation work or propose that I know who he really was.

Here are some interview questions I pulled from Chatgpt:

1. What is the character’s name? Where was the character born?

Victor Daniel Perrone (his mother’s surname) was born in New Orleans, LA.

2. What is the character’s family background?

Heโ€™s half-black, half-Italian. He and his mother, Luanne, and half-sister, Sherry, lived in the squalor of the French Quarter. His father, Francis “Frank” Basso, owned a small grocery and was the landlord of the apartment building which they lived in. His mother worked for a dry cleaner shop.

3. What is the character’s earliest memory?

His earliest memory was of his father beating his mother and his sister over a broken glass picture frame. His father was a violent alcoholic.

4. What was the character’s childhood like?

Terrible and abusive. The nightmare abuse stopped finally after Francis drowned his sister in the bathtub while in a drunken rage. He escaped into the night and was never punished.

5. Did the character have any siblings? If so, what was their relationship like?

They were very close due to the severity of their situation. They were poor and their mother was too weak to stand up to the man.ย Due to his age, he was spared most of the beatings, but he witnessed the attacks.

6. What significant events shaped the character’s early years?

He grew up bitter and angry toward Italians like his father. When he was only fourteen, he left his mother to pursue his father. He managed to get a position on a Mississippi river ferry. There he learned about jazz and became a decent musician.

7. What was the character’s education like?

He was intelligent, talented as a trumpet player, but limited since he didnโ€™t finish school. While he did obtain a modest career as a jazz player, he never got fame due to his quick temper and bitterness. He was still driven to get justice against his father and kept up his search in his free time.

8. What were the character’s hobbies and interests as a child?

He enjoyed music and had an interest in dark poetry. While he didnโ€™t finish school, he did self-teach himself literature and read a lot of the classics. He was fairly well-spoken and could be eloquent. This sometimes made him seem condescending and pompous.

9. Did the character have any close friends growing up?

No. He didnโ€™t make friends. He grew up poor, dirty, and standoffish. Plus, it was easier to hide bruises and injuries if you didnโ€™t get close to people.

10. Did the character experience any traumatic events in childhood?

The day he learned he was a child of rape really impacted him. His sisterโ€™s father had just died at sea working on a fishing vessel. His father who was their landlord immediately attacked and raped his mother when he learned of the fatherโ€™s death. Authorities didn’t put much effort in the case against him as Francis was a “creditable” white business man and she was a poor black woman.

11. What was the character’s relationship with their parents like?

Of course, he loved his mother but grew disgusted with her lack of strength to stand up for herself or the children. He hated his father. After Francis killed his sister and escaped justice, he began having fantasies about killing him. It led to his homicidal desires.

12. What are the character’s cultural and religious beliefs?

He has a shallow belief in God and Hell. He feels he is an avenging spirit for God, but doesn’t have any real morality. As an instrument of God, Victor targets Italian males especially ones he feels are irredeemable sinners.

13. How did the character’s upbringing influence their values and beliefs?

He hides behind his musician persona and religion in order to enact his murders. He still keeps aloof and doesnโ€™t have any romantic relationships or lasting friendships.

14. What were the character’s dreams and aspirations as a child?

He had dreams of taking his mother and sister away. Living in the country on a simple farm. Anywhere really to keep his family safe from Francis.

15. Did the character face any challenges or obstacles in their youth?

He ran away at the age of fourteen after his sister’s death. First, he wanted to find his father, but then ended up on the street. Life turned around for him when he gained a post on the ferry. But his nagging need to find his father kept him tied to his tragic past. This broke his soul and eventually his mental status.

16. Has the character experienced loss or grief in their life?

Only his sisterโ€™s murder affected him. When his mother died alone ten years after he left, he didnโ€™t even bother to attend her funeral.ย 

17. What are the character’s strengths and weaknesses based on their past experiences?

Heโ€™s very critical of himself and others. Doesnโ€™t always say his true thoughts, but he doesnโ€™t hide his negativity well either.

18. How did the character’s past shape their personality?

His anger, his pursuit, and his homicidal rage him led down many dark paths. In the story, Victor will be an easy target for the evil of Hasthra. When the two meet in early 1918, Hasthra will easily manipulate and mold him into a killer.ย 

19. What is the character’s relationship with authority figures like?

He is quick to mock or think ill of the police as they never caught his father or brought him justice. This also makes him more brazen and even reckless when he begins his own slaughters. His confidence in their ineptitude proves accurate.

20. Has the character experienced any discrimination or prejudice?

He has faced some due to his mixed heritage, but he has more Italian features than black. He is quite handsome and his career as a jazz musician has kept that limited to a degree.

21. What is the character’s relationship with money and material possessions?

He has modest needs. Most of his money has gone towardย his goal of finding and killing his father. He will return from Kingston and live upon the river ferry and doesnโ€™t have need for much else. The constant relocation of the Mariah Lee, the river ferry, gives him a perfect way to keep eluding the police.

22. Has the character experienced any form of addiction or mental health issues?

Other than his obsession with punishing Italian men, he has no other addictions. He will become mainly one of many weapons wielded by Hasthra from its lair in Kingston.

23. What are the character’s fears and insecurities based on their past?

He isnโ€™t too worried about the police and being caught. He has honed his craft well and knows how to remain a step ahead. His arrogance will trip him up eventually. He is haunted by nightmares from his childhood. They spark his rage or send him into a delusional panic as his mental state breaks down further and further.

24. Has the character ever been in trouble with the law?

Caught a couple of times as a teen stealing but nothing around his darker deeds. He was never on their radar or been a person-of-interest in any case.

25. What is the character’s relationship with their hometown or place of origin?

He haunts New Orleans because he vows that his father is still out there somewhere. He will keep killing him over and over.

As you can see, these questions and others help me delve into the mind of the character, even the mind of one so sick and broken. It also helps me tie historical facts with my fictional content. I already have a strong sense of the evil entity, Hasthra, and now when the two intersect I will be able to have an in depth dialogue with the two. This meeting will alter many lives and set in motion a domino effect of death and mayhem.

Which is just what Hasthra feeds upon and gathers into its power…

I hope that this has been interesting for you and gives you a sneak peek into the upcoming sequel to my short story in the horror anthology, Weatherly Lane 2! (The inside word is that the sequel will be released sometime in the first half of 2025!)

Fresh Content : Hasthra (rough draft) PT #2 โ€“ Derek Barton โ€“ย 2/22/2024

So here is more of my origin short story for the Weatherly Lane Anthology. Thank you to those who gave me their feedback on the first part. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

I am posting this next section which is a build up to the story’s climax and conclusion. THIS DOESN’T CONCLUDE ON HERE (…the anthology is set to print in the coming months! Don’t miss out! It’s an exciting ending!! And the beginning to a great collection of short stories from upcoming indie authors!!)


Pastor Matthew Albright hesitated before he knocked on the door of Mayor Littleโ€™s large white ranch house.  In his late thirties, he was a tall man with a slender build, pale complexion and thick salt-and-pepper hair. He wore casual clothes but sported the small white collar at his neck as custom to his position.

It was late and well past supper time. Yet he couldnโ€™t hold off talking with her.

His knock prompted several dogs to bark upon the property and more lanterns were lit inside. A tall black man, Jeffrey, unlocked and answered the door. He was even taller than Matthew and dressed in a black uniform jacket and cotton pants. 

โ€œYes? What do you need, Pastor?โ€ Jeffrey asked. He knew Matthew as he had been coming to hear sermons for a few weeks now.

โ€œI need to speak with Madam Little. Is she available? It is important or I wouldnโ€™t be bothering her.โ€

Jeffrey frowned but nodded. โ€œItโ€ฆitโ€™s not the best time for a visit.โ€

โ€œI know but itโ€™s urgent and cannot wait for morning. Please?โ€

He sighed, stepped aside, and allowed the pastor step in. 

โ€œOne moment.โ€ He walked down a hallway on the right and then ascended some steps to the next floor.

Moments later, Matthew was led to a parlor office. It was elaborate and decorated befitting her role. Last summer, she had actually gained her position after her husband Mayor Shannon Little had been struck down by a heart attack. The morning after a terrible tornado had destroyed several buildings along the main streets of Kingston.

Her resilience and her ingenuity amid the tragedy proved her leadership. She simply took on the responsibility and duties of her late husband and no one refuted it. Two weeks ago, she ran officially and obtained the title unopposed.

Candace Little was short and broad. She sat behind a wide oak desk littered with books and papers. She had a steaming cup of coffee in one hand. Her thinning red hair was gathered in a ponytail. Her sharp brown eyes above her red cheeks studied the pastor as he entered and stood before her desk.

โ€œGood evening, Pastor Albright.โ€ It wasnโ€™t the warmest of welcomes.

โ€œCandace, thank you for seeing me.โ€ He sat down in one of two straight-back chairs before the desk.

She took a sip of her coffee but didnโ€™t comment or offer him any of the drink. A thick journal sat open on her desk next to an open crystal decanter filled with dark whiskey. The smell of alcohol and coffee filled the room.

โ€œI wanted to come and see if you had heard the news about what they found in the mine today. Do you have any contacts at Farbrynn in Minneapolis? Have they given you any indication of what they intend to do with the remains?โ€

She took a moment to gather her thoughts, sat back in her own dark burgundy, leather chair, and took another sip of the hot coffee. โ€œI appreciate your interest, but Iโ€™m not sure why this is a church matter.โ€ She was straightforward and always tactful, but Matthew got the distinct impression she did not like him or the church. 

โ€œIt isnโ€™t. I am here more on a task of personal interest, I guess. You see, I was told there are Indian artifacts and probably Chippewa remains found. I have studied the Chippewa culture through the Church. I could certainly lend my expertise to any negotiations you will have with the local tribe representatives.โ€

โ€œI see,โ€ she said. Candace abruptly stood and offered her hand out for him to shake. โ€œIโ€™m afraid you have wasted your time, pastor. The decisions of the mine leadership is beyond my purview and yours. And it has not been proven there are any injun items thereโ€”โ€œ

โ€œButโ€ฆโ€

โ€œAgain, Iโ€™m sorry but this is the mineโ€™s business, not yours or the churchโ€™s. Keep in mind that the success of the mining operation benefits all of us greatly. I and the town  support them completely. Now, Jeffrey will guide you back to the door. Good night, pastor.โ€ She had thoroughly dismissed him and had reopened the large journal on her desk and took up her pencil.

โ€œI am not trying to interfere or overstep you. I am just trying to prevent any hostilities arising should those burial remains get moved or damaged. The preservation of their ancestors are very important in the Indian religions. Any mistake could greatly effect this town as well.โ€

โ€œAll right, Pastor Albright. Your opinions have been clearly stated. Should any actual savage remains surface and be reported to me by Farbrynn, I may call upon your expertise. As ofโ€”โ€œ

โ€œCandace. Why do you have such disdain for me?โ€ Matthew asked in frustration.

In response, she slapped shut the journal. She was suddenly seething. Her face grew even more red. โ€œSir! You will address me as my role requires as Madam Mayor or Madam Little. You dare to  march over here at this time of night and then assume I will give you full access to any private town business I have.โ€ She stood in her fury and set her cup down hard, splashing its contents on the pages of the work journal. โ€œFirst off, you are new here! An outsider still needing to prove your worth to this town. Second, I hang no trust in the church, itโ€™s servants and this all mighty absent deity you bow down to so easily!โ€ 

Matthew gasped at her blasphemy and crossed himself with the holy sign.

โ€œWhen this town needed God, he took my husband and abandoned us to the piles of buildings he left behind in his wake! I donโ€™t need him, you or anyone!โ€ Tears of rage and obvious pent up grief streamed down her cheeks.

Mathew bowed and gave her a brief nod. โ€œI am sorry, Madam Mayor to disturb you with my presumptions. Iโ€™ll pray on your behalf.โ€ 

โ€œScrew your prayers!โ€ She screamed at his back.

He cut off the rest of her drunken rage by closing the parlor door.

****

Sheriff Johnathan Benson twisted at one end of his golden brown mustache in his fingers as he knelt over the corpse. A peculiar smell, sour and fetid like rotting vegetables wafted from the dead man. He brought up a red handkerchief and covered his mouth and nose. โ€œAnd no one has seen the head?โ€ he asked. 

A younger man, nineteen and only a couple years older than Joshua Brown and Richie Albright, stood behind him. He held a small vanilla notepad with pencil in hand and had taken down a few facts about the scene along with a rudimentary sketch. Deputy Cory Owens answered, โ€œNo, sir. Both of us searched the entire chamber after he was reported to us.โ€

โ€œWhere is Deputy Redmond anyway?โ€ 

โ€œHe rushed over to Danaโ€™s. He didnโ€™t think it was proper she hear of her brotherโ€™s murder through town gossip.โ€

The sheriff looked up at Cory. He nodded. It was likely best. This was new ground for him. He never had to investigate a murder or as they like to say in those fancy detective tales, a homicide. Nor did he have any training. In fact, he could only recall maybe two deaths from bar brawls in Kingstonโ€™s entire history. He was over his head and out of his element.

He shook his head in disbelief. โ€œI donโ€™t understandโ€ฆLook at the condition of the body. His skin is dried and crusted terribly. Itโ€™s almost curled up on itself as if sucked inward! What does that? Canโ€™t be just because his body was here in the mine all night.โ€ He stood up and walked around to the other side of the body. โ€œAlmost all of his blood has left and pooled around him, hardly any looks like it remained inside.โ€

Cory nodded, his face pale and gray. The deputy was becoming very nauseous. He extended his hand and pointed at the shoulders and bloody neck stump. โ€œWhat do you think did that? A bear? A wolf?โ€

โ€œI havenโ€™t heard of any sightings. Maybe though.โ€ He stopped then took the notes from the young manโ€™s hands. โ€œGo get some fresh air. Then track down Tommy. You two will have to guard the mine entrance tonight. See if the Miller brothers will help or get volunteers and deputize them. I need to secure the crime scene and preserve any evidence. Tell Doc Overton to have Waltersโ€™ remains guarded at his place too. Itโ€™s important we do this right. We donโ€™t want his killer to get away with this because we were sloppy. Can I count on you, Deputy Owens?โ€

Cory nodded. He was barely holding his breakfast back. He spun and bolted down the mine tunnel.

Ten minutes later, Deputy Cory and Deputy Tommy ran back together into the cave, sweaty and breathless.

โ€œSheriff! Sh-Sheriff Benson, you bet-better come q-quick!โ€ stuttered Cory.

โ€œYeah, you got to come see this!โ€ Tommy insisted. He was heavier than Cory and had a patchy beard that matched his black, curly hair.

The two younger men led the sheriff along the tunnels till they arrived at the mine entrance. Cory pointed at the horizon. Sitting tall in his saddle upon a roan mare, was a dark figure, silhouetted against the sunset. It was a male Chippewa Indian.

โ€œDamnations,โ€ cursed the lawman. โ€œStay here! Oh, and do not let anyone else approach him or the mines.โ€ Several miners and townsfolk had already gathered and were watching the lone native upon the hill as well.

Sheriff Benson then walked slowly up the hill surrounding the mine entrance. The two talked for a brief, few minutes. When he returned, he refused to answer their questions or to discuss the matter further. โ€œI need you two to go to town and gather as many of the resident families as possible. We will have a Townhall Meeting at 6 this evening at Albright’s Church. I will advise everyone of the situation in the mine and this afternoonโ€™s injun visitation. We need to take immediate control of this before it gets out of hand.โ€

****

The night was humid and very musky. It was as if the night air had reacted and fed off the volatile townhall meeting. A thunderhead grew and spread along the horizon. Flashes of lightning flared and angry thunderclaps rolled over the fields.

Nothing at all was resolved nor made clear in the meeting. Mayor Little verified a bit of news and rumors as Sheriff Benson stood silently behind her. The mine had stopped for an undetermined time. Also, the mine had possibly discovered a new vein of gold. There had been some kind of accident and Foreman Chauncey Walters was found dead. She would not confirm or even discuss the possibility of injun presence in the mine or live representatives outside the mine.

Before she could dismiss the meeting, Pastor Albright stood up and insisted on making a statement. โ€œWith the obvious witness accounts of the Chippewa Indians seen this afternoon, I think it is irresponsible to not have your involvement in the handling of the remains found in the mine. If you leave it up to them, you are only inviting a conflict with the Indian tribes. I have an extensive amount of education on their culture. Their fundamental beliefs are imperative that they protect the dead andโ€”โ€

โ€œSit down and be quiet, Pastor!โ€ shouted Geof Brown. He stood among a large group of miners. His face was red and sweaty. In his hand was a mug, slopping over with beer. โ€œYou stick to the good lord and preach his word. None else concerns you. No one cares what these savages think and what they want. Only thing that matters is how this town will benefit from that gold!โ€

Cheers went all around him. The mayor shot Matthew a knowing and wry smile.

โ€œAs we already have talked over last night, the mine is owned and ruled over by Aaron Farbrynn. It is in his hands, not godโ€™s or ourโ€™s,โ€ she called out over the noise of the crowd.

The pastor sat down once again defeated.

โ€œThis meeting is over. Sheriff Benson asks that everyone head home tonight. There is a storm coming and it would be best you are not caught in it,โ€ the mayor said.

As the crowd began to disperse, the group of miners with Geof stood up but did not drift toward the door. The cloud of alcohol wafted in the air around them.

They moved and surrounded the pastorโ€™s seat.

โ€œNo, boys! Come on, letโ€™s go home,โ€ Sheriff Benson called out as he tried to cross the room and get through the crowd of townsfolk.

โ€œWhat gives you this right to talk down to us, Pastor?โ€ said Carter Thompson. He was a squat man, bearded and scruffy. His balding head was shiny and grimy with mine dust. He wavered on his feet and his eyes were bloodshot.

โ€œYeah! You some kind of injun lover?โ€ another miner chimed in.

The pastor shook his head. โ€œNo. I was just offering to help so we donโ€™t have any kind of violence or retaliation from theโ€”โ€

โ€œYou arenโ€™t from here so you just mind your church and shut the hellโ€”โ€

Sheriff Benson had finally navigated over to Matthewโ€™s side. โ€œBoys. You need to go home and sleep it off. The pastor didnโ€™t mean any harm.โ€

โ€œI canโ€™t believe you are sticking up for him and those savages!โ€ Geoff roared.

โ€œHe isnโ€™t.โ€ the sheriff put his hand on his holster but didnโ€™t draw the pistol. โ€œThe meeting is over. You need to think of your actions here, fellas. Attacking a man of the cloth in his own church is certainly a ticket to eternal damnation, donโ€™t you think?โ€

Like a divine sign, the storm broke and thunder erupted over their heads.

That set several of the drunk miners back on their heels. Grunts and murmured curses followed the men as they had had enough and walked toward the main church entrance. Several still showed their anger by throwing wooden chairs out of their way.

Sheriff Bensen leaned down and spoke in the pastorโ€™s ear. โ€œNext time, Father, read the room. I understand your points, but you stirring the pot, only made my job that much harder. You and your son stay in tonight. Lock your doors and windows this evening. Everything will blow over in a few days. Until then, let me worry about the mine and the injun burial site.โ€

**** 

The flash lightning storm raged all night, however, only the grain mill suffered some damage and a small fire.

Sheriff Benson sent his two deputies to escort Pastor Albright to the mine.

Word of this spread like wildfire in the town.

The pastor kept his eyes ahead and did not meet anyone eyes along the walk to the mine. He could feel their stares and the heat from high emotions. He had made himself  a temporary target for their anxiety. The town had faced a long winter ahead. The crops had not produced well and many were relying on the mine to secure their homes. Now with the possibility of newfound wealth, the townsfolk were not letting up this hope. It remained in their hands as tight as a vice grip.

โ€œThank you, Pastor Albright for coming out this morning,โ€ the sheriff greeted him with a genuine smile.

โ€œOf course.โ€

โ€œListen, last night was a bad combination of alcohol and greed. Donโ€™t take it to heart and donโ€™t let it spoil your view of these people.โ€

The pastor nodded but remained quiet.

โ€˜Anyway, I figured it was important for you to look at the site and give me your guess on what we are dealing with. No one is here to interrupt you or condemn you. I need to understand what is here thatโ€™s all.โ€

He led Matthew into the dark chamber. The thick cloud of dust and smoke remained clinging to the cavern ceiling. Both men stooped to keep out of it.

Matthew was awestruck at the boulder and the bleached skulls. He ran his fingertips along the carved symbols and letters that circled each of the nooks.

โ€œI have never seen anything like this. Sheriff, this is remarkable! The Church maintains a large collection in its holdings in New York. They gather everything and preserve every bit they can. The common motto is ‘it is better to know your enemy than to hide in ignorance and underestimate them’. I understand that the miners donโ€™t understand my position and see it as interfering, but ifย I could get them to see thatโ€”โ€

โ€œPastor Albright,โ€ he said and held his hand up before him. โ€œStop. I am a religious man and try to be a fair man. However, I lost my father and an older sister in a savages attack when I was three years old. I have no love them but I do not hold grudges or remain fixated on the past. Letโ€™s stick to what you see and explain anything you can, but letโ€™s leave out any sermons on how all men are equal to God, alright?โ€

Matthewโ€™s shoulders slumped in defeat. He turned then walked a circle around the boulder. He knelt down and studied the four clay monoliths. โ€œWas this broken before or after the miners found the chamber?โ€

โ€œI was told that it was accidentally dropped. What are they and do you know what the symbols and words mean?โ€

โ€œMy guess is that they represent the four key elements of nature: water, fire, earth and air. Air is on the broken one. But I have not seen these in a burial site or in any documents of the texts. Most tombs or burial mounds are complete. I am not sure that this really was a burial site.โ€

The sheriff clapped his hands together. โ€œThatโ€™s excellent news!โ€

Now it was Matthewโ€™s time to raise a hand. โ€œThe fact that it is not a burial doesnโ€™t mean that the tribe wonโ€™t be upset at the mishandling of the artifacts.โ€

โ€œI get that. I do. However, right now my only concern can be on who killed old Chauncey.โ€

Both men paused unsure how to proceed with their arguments.

Finally, Matthew said, โ€œDid the visitors yesterday give you an indication where they are camped? I might be able to get better information straight from the source. If theyโ€™ll talk to me that is.โ€

โ€œHead due south, theyโ€™re camped at the base of the cliffs,โ€ he replied. โ€œSaid theyโ€™re waiting there till morning for us to change our mindsโ€ฆโ€

**** 

โ€œI donโ€™t feel right about this, Joshua,โ€ Richie said, kneeling in the shadows between two large broken-down mining carts.

They were hunched down together, outside the mine entrance. Ahead of them were two miners, sitting on stools with a gas lantern hooked on a pole above their heads. The miners were bored, restless, and drinking from a tall bottle of whiskey they shared.

โ€œLook. I get it, but you and you dad donโ€™t understand how bad this town needs the mine right now. That twister last summer storm took out any surplus harvest we had. Hell, we might not have enough to sustain us through this winter. So we go inโ€”โ€

โ€œYouโ€™re doing this for you! Not the town. Stop trying to bullshit me.โ€

Joshua grimaced at the accusation but looked down at his shoes. โ€œYes. Some of it works out well for me. My dad is hot about this gold. If I can ensure that the mine will resume uninterrupted and  they start on that gold, it will really be something. Something that will impress him, you know?โ€

The boys grew quiet. The awkward silence was very palpable.

Joshua looked up. โ€œAnd, if you get those artifacts for your father, then he can preserve them like he wants. It will mean a lot to him. We both win out. If we donโ€™t do this, you know the mine or the miners will destroy them before they give in to the injun demands.โ€

โ€œAlright. I guess.โ€  Richie did not look convinced. He had been more outreasoned than converted to the idea. โ€œDo you have them?โ€

The young miner held out the pair of small firework sticks in his hand.

Moments later, the pair ran full speed down the mine shaft. Joshua led the way more by memory than by sight. Most of the lanterns were put out since the operations were still on hold.

Finally, at the mouth of the Indian chamber, they stopped and caught their breaths.

Richie yanked the leather backpack off and sat with his back to the tunnel wall. โ€œI donโ€™t think they saw us. Do you hear anyone?โ€

The other boy only shook his head, still too winded to speak.

โ€œWe take it all.ย  The miners will think the injuns took it all. My Pop told me that the sheriff tell them to not even think of making one step near the town or the mine. The injuns will never know what happened. Your father can either send the items to his church or drop them off secretly to the injuns. Everything safe and secure, you know.โ€

โ€œAll right. Give me a minute before we go in.โ€

**** 

ย Matthew brought the horse to a slow trot. A campfire was burning ahead. Several Indians were sitting around it, enjoying a late meal. Three small teepees were erected behind them.

He eased off the saddle and tied the horse to a nearby tree. He didnโ€™t want to surprise or alarm them by riding up unannounced. He swallowed hard. The entire trip there he debated on what to say or what to ask. Now that he was right in front of them, he was shaking and completely tongue-tied. He wondered if he should have asked the sheriff to escort him. Being all alone now seemed foolish.

Yet if I donโ€™t speak with them, the situation within the mines will undoubtedly get worse. I have to learn more to help everyone out of this mess, he thought.

Shrugging his shoulders and craning his head to the left and right, he tried to work out some of the stiffness. The moon beamed high over head. The night was getting late.

Sighing with anxiety, he began to walk toward the camp.

โ€œHello? Hello there. I am notโ€”โ€ A thin, young warrior stepped out of the shadows on his right, an arrow already knocked in his bow.

โ€œStop!โ€ the warrior ordered with a very thick accent. Then he cried out several words over his shoulder. Quickly others ran to them.

The pastor was grabbed by both arms and swiftly taken within the light of the campfire.

Matthew immediately recognized the Indian, the only one to remain sitting at the fire. It was the lone warrior who had appeared at the mines.

โ€œIt is late for you to come out. Did something happen in the mines or did the sheriff send you?โ€ the older man asked. He was heavier than the others, with some gray at his temples. One of his ears was missing and a long scar ran through it and down to his neckline. His accent was not as bad as the otherโ€™s had been.

โ€œI am not here for the sheriff directly. I am Pastor Matthew Albright. I wanted to speak with you right away. Iโ€™m sorry to disturb you.โ€

The Indian nodded, then gestured for the pastor to sit across from him. โ€œI am Harva Giiwedin, a voice for our people, the Chippewa.โ€

A lone wolf howled then several others joined. They were distant but his horse and the tribeโ€™s horses all whinnied and pranced about. The night grew still again.

โ€œI know you spoke earlier with the sheriff and Iโ€™m sure you are aware that the miners stumbled across one of your burial sites. I wanted to ask you about it. In my time at the Church, I learned a lot about the Chippewa and other tribe cultures. And in the books and pictures, I never seen a burial site quite like this.โ€

โ€œYou were not meant to see it. No man, white or red, was meant to. You must understand that this is not a burial site.โ€

โ€œWhat do you mean? I saw remains. Skulls. Is it an altar or for another religious purpose?โ€

Halva shook his head. He stopped, lifted up a small cup and drank from it. This was the moment, Matthew spotted the fact that the man was trembling and sweating. He was terrified.

โ€œIt is not for prayer. It is a prison!โ€

โ€œA prison?โ€

โ€œYes, but not for our world. It is a prison to hold the evil spirit within. I asked the sheriff if the miners had disturbed the grounds. Was he honest with me? He said that they had not entered the area only looked in.โ€

It was the pastorโ€™s turn to be anxious. โ€œI will not lie to you. They did not mean any disrespect or mean to cause any offence but the miners did go inโ€”โ€

โ€œDid you see the area? Were there four longโ€ฆstatutes?โ€

โ€œYes, the clay monoliths? They were marked with the elements Air, Earth, Fire and Water, Exceptโ€ฆโ€ he paused then looked down at his hands and he finished with trepidation. โ€œThe Air one was damaged at the base. Iโ€™m not sure how or when.โ€

Halva moaned. โ€œThis is very bad. I was afraid of this. Oh curse you white men! Hasthra has been released!โ€

He motioned for one of his companions then gave some heated instructions. The other raced off and began rummaging inside of their teepees.

โ€œAgain, I do apologize for the miners. They were not trying to cause any issues. Who is Hasthra?โ€

Halva had regained some composure. He ignored the pastor’s question and asked his own. โ€œHas anyone been hurt or gone missing?โ€

โ€œYes. A foreman was killed. The sheriff is looking into it.โ€

The other younger warrior returned carrying a deer hide bag. He gave it to Halva.

โ€œYou are a religious man you said. A Christian pastor? Then I trust I can give you this to protect yourselves and your people.” He handed over the bag.

Matthew opened it and saw a slender engraved wooden rod with a large rock mallet tied to the end. It was a war club, he had seen a few in drawings. This one, however, had a highly polished and engraved quartz stone in the center. Painted symbols decorated the face of the stone. Laying next to the wooden club was a rolled-up parchment.

โ€œThis is the iล‹yaล‹ iล‹jรกtสพe, a powerful weapon to ward off the evil spirit. It will attract the spirit but then if beaten with the iล‹yaล‹ iล‹jรกtสพe it can be contained till you restore the prison.โ€

โ€œWait. What evil spirit? You are going too fast. Tell me what is this all about?โ€

Sighing out loud, Halva spoke slowly but sternly. โ€œYour people have broken one of the four guardians to a spiritual prison. Hasthra is a dangerous entity that came alive through a powerful curse of murder and vengeance. It will not ever stop devouring souls. I do not know all the words to explain or to convince you of this. I can only give you a weaponโ€”โ€

โ€œWhy me? Why arenโ€™t you going in there since you know how to stop it? You know what this thing is.โ€

โ€œThe sheriff made it clear that we could not enter the mines under any circumstance. He said the miners would attack to protect the property. It would be the same if the townsfolk, spotted us in the borders of town. He said the only way to preserve peace is if we let him handle it. We thought it would be safe since he swore no one entered the prison ground. We were heading back to report to the elders. I was a fool to accept his word!โ€

โ€œI see. But will this thing,โ€ Matthew pointed to the bag. โ€œWill it restore the prison or can the spirit be destroyed?โ€

โ€œNo, the iล‹yaล‹ iล‹jรกtสพe will keep Hasthra at bay for a while, but a new prison must be made along with the skulls of any of its victims. The papers there will show you the symbols you must surround Hasthra and its victims. The symbols will hold it inside the quartz. Most important step: you must keep anyone from disturbing the ground ever again.โ€

Shaking his head, Matthew said, โ€œHow? The mine company, the town, they will never accept that. They own that land and want to mine it!โ€

โ€œOnly death can be found there now.โ€ His words were whispered low.

โ€œI am not a warrior though, Halvaโ€ฆ I am a man of God. I am not sure I am right for this.โ€

โ€œYou have to be. If I or my men go there, then you will have more bodies and bloodshed. The Chippewa do not wish to curse the white man with Hasthra, but we will not lose lives and souls for them either. Your people trespassed on sacred grounds. And lied to us as well as spurned our efforts to aid. Now they will have to resolve this themselves.โ€


I would love to hear from you again on this. Are you excited to find out what happens to the wild west town of Kingston? You’ll never believe the ending and the horrific curse that befalls the land of 1417 Weatherly Lane, Kingston, MN 80954…

Fresh Content : Hasthra (rough draft) โ€“ Derek Barton โ€“ย 2/5/2024

Here is a sneak peek at my upcoming submission for an anthology scheduled to come out this year. It’s a partnership of a great group of up-and-coming new stars in the horror field. I am honored to participate!

The main theme of the anthology is an antique Ouija Board which finds its way handed down generation by generation and all the mayhem it causes!

My contribution will be the origin story to the evil that taints the land of 1417 Weatherly Lane, Kingston, MN where all the stories will take place.


Here is the beginning of the evil legacy…

Kingston, MNโ€‚7/5/1911

Geof Brown wiped the oily dark grease from his forehead as a wide grin bared his yellowing teeth. He removed a small rock hammer from his leather belt and chipped at a section of the tunnel wall in front of him.

As the chips fell, small patches of sparkling metal were revealed. โ€œYouโ€™re seeing this, ainโ€™t ya?โ€

Another man, clad in matching, dark burlap overalls and a yellow hard hat with a small lantern gave him an incredulous look. โ€œBy God. You donโ€™t suppose it isโ€ฆโ€

โ€œI do indeed! Back in the late nineties, maybe 1896 this whole region was once mined for gold. Hell, I bet Farbrynn Foundation was first a gold mine, not an iron mine like it is  today!โ€

Both quieted down to stare in reverence at the vein of gold weaving a crooked path across the wall.

The pair of miners had been detonating and expanding the dig site all week. They now stood at the end of it and had begun clearing the piles of debris when Geoff called out for the other miner to join him.

โ€œWe going to report this?โ€ Memphis asked.

โ€œYou think it would go unnoticed?โ€ he chuckled. โ€œUs working away at the middle of this tunnel versus us extending the wing to the east as our orders show. Weโ€™d be locked up before dusk in Sheriff Bensonโ€™s hold for theft!โ€ 

โ€œWait,โ€ Memphis mumbled and laid his palm flat on the stone then his ear. โ€œDid you hear something?โ€

Before Geoff could reply, he tapped his knuckles along the surface. An empty thud answered his rappings. โ€œI think itโ€™s hollow behind this wall.โ€

Geoff drew closer and also knocked on the wall making his own hollow thuds. โ€œYouโ€™re right. About here, it gets solid again.โ€ He had walked back and forth about eight feet of the tunnel. 

โ€œLetโ€™s put one charge there and open it up. Maybe the vein is bigger in there.โ€ Greed flooded his anxious eyes.

Geoff nodded and went back to their tool cart for his chisel and hammer. 

โ€œGet only a half of a stick. We donโ€™t want to knock the roof down, just punch a hole here.โ€ He indicated a spot with his fingers. โ€œAbout here should do.โ€

Fifteen minutes later, they crouched under a thick cloud of dust and smoke that hovered near the ceiling. The thump and ring from the explosion still rang in their ears. Slowly Geoff and Memphis approached the new entry. After a detonation, one never knew exactly how well the chamber walls would hold. It was best never to rush right in. Besides the normal precautions, they both felt the sudden tension or unease in the air. It was an odd sensation like the electricity you felt before a powerful thunderstorm broke. Stale, musty air wafted out toward them. 

โ€œLook at that!โ€ exclaimed Memphis as his lantern highlighted the hollow chamber. It was about thirty feet across and the ceiling arched from seven to a dozen feet high. It appeared to be cut out of the rock by hand. No normal tool marks were visible. 

Otherwise, empty, its walls had the normal striations of iron ore. Fortunately, the new thin line of gold continued as they had hoped for along the eastern section.   

In the center of the room stood a massive boulder. It was easily a ton in weight and over five feet long. Carved by hand were deep pockets in the rockโ€™s surface. Inside these nooks were six, sun-bleached white skulls. Surrounding the skulls were strings of letters and symbols. On top, a large egg-shaped glass globe sat. It was dark purple, smooth and opaque.

From the ceiling were long lines of colored beads and polished stones. Clay vases with flower remnants and old feathers, crusty and dried, decorated the ground at the base of the boulder. 

Forming a square about the boulder were four thin clay monoliths. These too were intricately engraved with symbols.

โ€œAinโ€™t this sumthinโ€™! God knows itโ€™s Injun! You think this is a burial site?โ€ He pulled one of the monoliths from the ground and held it in his arms to get a closer look at the engravings upon it. 

Geoff frowned and snapped, โ€œBest hope not. You know how angry they get when their stuff is messed with.โ€ 

Memphis blanched at the statement and fumbled with the piece. It dropped and landed hard on one corner. It shattered upon impact. Immediately a gust of brownish powder blew out and an odd echo of water dripping filled the room. It faded fast.

โ€œWhat the hell, man! Be careful!โ€ Geoff scolded.

โ€œIโ€™m sorry, it just jumpedโ€”” Memphis was cut off as a gale of icy wind swept over them. The cavern darkened unnaturally and a low hum and vibration could be felt through their boots. They both sprinted in terror out of the chamber and ran back to the tool cart. 

โ€œWe got to get the foreman anyway. Come on!โ€ Geoff grabbed the older miner by the forearm and directed him back down the tunnel where they had arrived. Both men kept glancing back, sure they were being followed. Only the mineโ€™s eternal darkness filled the tunnels behind them.

****

Chauncey Walters stood at the entrance to the chamber as Geoff and Memphis had created an hour ago. His hands were in tight fists buried into his hips. He stared intently at the items within the room but hadnโ€™t stepped foot inside. The rest of the B Wing crew were gathered in a group behind him. No one dared a whisper. Finally coughing into his hand, he turned and focused on the original pair. Geoff took a short drink of water from a canteen while Memphis studied his work boots. 

โ€œSo, you two thought it wise to blast this wall here, huh? Weaken the tunnel capacity. Jeopardize the entire region hereโ€ฆ because of this hollow pocket, am I understanding this situation, right?โ€

โ€œWell, it was moreโ€”” Geoff began.

Chauncey lunged forward and stood in his face. โ€œWhen did you start getting paid to think down here? Didnโ€™t I write down exactly what your orders were for this week?โ€ 

Both miners remained silent. 

โ€œNow because you took it upon yourselves to act, I have this mess,โ€ he spun and gestured wildly at the piles of debris and the native artifacts. He rotated back to them. โ€œI am in charge here, Mister Brown! Me! You do get that? Iโ€™m the one who has to explain this. Or do you want to go ahead and jump in here too?โ€ 

Geoff and Memphis shook their heads no and kept their silence.

โ€œYou wasted resources, company time, damaged whatever that injun garbage is, and put the wing at risk!   The only way I can justify keeping you two idiots is you stumbled across this possible gold vein. Hopefully we can recoup the costs and maybe even save this quarter for Farbrynn. So, all of you, hear this now and be sure you fully understand what I am saying. Until I say otherwise no one utters a word of this outside this mine. Itโ€™ll be in Leadershipโ€™s hands on how we go forward with this dig. Am I clear?โ€

Grunts and nodding heads quickly answered. They turned all together and as one marched away into the darkness.

โ€œDo not think I wonโ€™t fire anyone right on the spot for breaking the silence,โ€ he shouted. โ€œKeep this in confidence. This gold may be the windfall Kingston has been hoping for. We just have to plan this out perfectly. Until then we donโ€™t want any mistakes orโ€ฆโ€ He paused and looked over at the boulder with the native remains. โ€œWe canโ€™t have any delays due to conflicts and โ€˜improper handling of sacred remainsโ€™ if you get my intention. Today we will close the mine operations early while I send for direction by Leadership. Not a word fellas! Now go.โ€ He stopped to spit cave dust into one corner. 

**** 

โ€œHey, man, come have a drink with me at Baronโ€™s,โ€ Joshua Brown called out. He was standing in the open doorway to the only town saloon and waving at a group of other young men who were emerging from the Tannerโ€™s Inn stables. Joshua was shorter than most for his age, but he had powerful arms from his years of work in the mines with his father. His long, brown hair stuck out from under his wool cap.  His green eyes were bright with excitement.

Among the men he had waved over was his newest friend, Richie Albright. He was the son of the new pastor. Months before, they had moved into the farm lot on the edge of town and converted their small house into a Methodist Church. Richieโ€™s face was freckled and pale under his wispy blonde hair. He also wore thin wire glasses and was a little taller than most of the other men.

When he and Joshua walked together their differences were quite striking. However, they had bonded fast over their love of automobiles. Neither of them had actually owned one, but Richie had seen an actual first-model Ford T back in Chicago. He also had a growing collection of books on the subject. Most of their afternoons had been dedicated to discussing everything related to cars.

โ€œYou seem pretty happy. The mines are down early today?โ€ Richie asked as he and the other men caught up with Joshua at the steps.

โ€œYep! Got some news, butโ€ฆโ€ he paused and did a quick look around. The other men went ahead and walked into the Baron Vance Saloon. โ€œWeโ€™ll talk inside.โ€

Inside the small saloon, it was dark and smelled of stale beers. A few lanterns were turned on near the bar, but the overhead lights were not yet lit. In the large room were six drinking tables, three larger game tables along the right, and a bar piano in the back corner. In the opposite corner in the back was a stairwell leading up to the sleeping rooms. A few townsfolk sat at the bar, but the drinking tables were filling up fast with the miners. The room grew loud with laughter and talk of the gold vein.  

Before they wound their way to their own table, always near the back and the piano, Richie spun around and exclaimed, โ€œThey found gold in the mine?โ€

Joshua laughed, โ€œYep! Weโ€™re supposed to keep quiet about it, but thatโ€™s not happening!โ€

โ€œWhere?โ€ he asked as they sat down.

โ€œMy father and old Memphis were expanding the tunnels in the east wing when they found this small line. Oh! And get this, there is an injun burial ground right in the middle of the gold deposit!โ€

โ€œReally? It has to be the Chippewa,โ€ Richie said. He and his father had studied the history of Minnesota before they had trekked out to make a new start. Both had discovered in the process that they were avid Indian history buffs. However, they did not broadcast this to the local residents.

Joshua scrunched up his face in disgust and confusion. โ€œHow would I know? Injuns is injuns is all I know. And they were too dumb to mine out the gold!โ€

He then turned to wave down a saloon serving girl as she passed and asked for two mugs of ale.

โ€œWait! Did you say itโ€™s a burial site?โ€

Joshua took a long gulp from his beer, then said, โ€œYep! Well, at least, there were several skulls in it.โ€

Richie pushed his spectacles further up his nose. He was fascinated. The automobile chats had gone a bit dry for him. This was new and exciting. His father would be ecstatic too.

โ€œWhat did you see at the site?โ€

โ€œWellโ€ฆ itโ€™s a small chamber about thirty feet or so and just a few feet taller than a man. Inside was this big boulder where they carved out holes to put the heads in. There were feathers hanging from the ceiling and clay pottery stuff all around too. You could see the gold twinkling in the walls! Thad Williams thinks this is going to put Kingston on the map. Going to make us all rich!โ€

โ€œSo why did they stop the mining operations?โ€

โ€œThey have to get some direction on what to do with the gold and what to do with the burial site. Foreman Walters was all up in arms and shouting for everyone to be hush-hush on this. Threatened to fire anyone who talked.โ€ He looked all around him with a big wry grin. โ€œSure looks like we are all scared of that!โ€

โ€œMy father has some education on Indian Cultures. The Church wanted him to have it so he could help with any crisis negotiations. Anyway, do you think theyโ€™ll let him look at it?โ€

Joshua shrugged. He was paying more attention to the brunette serving girl working the left side of the room.

****

A thick cloud of dust and smoke clung to the ceiling inside the chamber. Light from his lantern barely illuminated the gloom of the chamber. Chauncey moved in closer to the wall and pulled out his small knife. โ€œLetโ€™s see just what we are dealing with, shall we?โ€

He scraped at the rock and dirty grime that obscured the vein of gold. It flaked into his open palm. Holding it inches from his eyes he could see the twinkling metal. A broad grin crossed his face. 

A subtle shift in the gravel sounded behind him. He snapped a glance behind him. No one else remained from the crew. Squinting, he peered into the dark entrance of the chamber. โ€œHello?โ€

Nothing.

He shrugged and turned his attention back to the wall.

Chauncey stood still trying to calculate how long he could delay his dispatch to the management at Aaron Farbrynn Mining Foundation. He planned to mine a patch or two that night when the mine was empty. He would skip town in a couple of weeks.

How long before anyone grew suspicious of the delays? Maybe four days at best he decided. With the new telegraph stations, communication was spotty. Then it would take some time for them to plan–

Another sound of shifting sand inside the mine. It was more distinctive this time and it was followed up with falling pebbles.

โ€œAlright. Whoโ€™s there? Come out!โ€ he bellowed before spinning around. Someone had defied his orders and stayed behind. Someone was going to be his example and get fired! 

Nothing again.

He marched over to the entrance of the hollow chamber and leaned in. โ€œJust come on out and letโ€™s get this over with. You canโ€™t hide in there for long and it will just go worse on you if I am forced to find you. Iโ€™m not playing hide-and-seek today!โ€

โ€œNish..tigggโ€ฆwaanโ€

The words floated out from the gloom of the chamber. Chauncey could not find their source. They were drawn out and said with a deep, rolling rumble.

โ€œWho is that?โ€ he demanded and took several steps inside. Keeping his head low out of the dust and smoke cloud, he crept closer to the center of the room where the boulder sat. If anyone was hiding in there, that would be the most logical spot.

โ€œYou not only disobeyed a direct order to leave, but you are messing with thisโ€ฆinjun stuff which is going to cause me even more grief. Come out now! Letโ€™s get out of here.โ€

โ€œNiiii toon,โ€ the words were whispered, the faint wind of them brushed his left ear as an ebony mist descended from the cloud and settled over his head. Immediately an intense pressure swelled Chaunceyโ€™s skull. 

His hands flew up and his finger nails dug into his temples. A gurgled scream stuck in his throat. He coughed hard and choked on the stale air of the cavern as he spun about his legs kicking madly. The foremanโ€™s body acted reflexively versus any thought or direction from him.ย 

Blood bubbled from his ears and out his nose. Somehow he had gnashed upon his tongue and more blood drooled out from his lips. 

โ€œNiiitoooon!โ€ the voice shrieked inside Chaunceyโ€™s head. It was still a deep bass sound, but it was filled with an intense emotion of rage. 

He was barely aware of the voice as he felt rather than heard the popping and sharp crack at the base of his shoulders. Bones snapped as his neck twisted abruptly to the left then yanked back hard to the right. A building scream of sheer raw agony started then was cut off brutally as his scalp split and peeled away to the sides. Chaunceyโ€™s eyes blazed to life with an unholy ivory-white light.ย 

More skin tore away, and tendons snapped free from the shoulders as the foremanโ€™s head ripped from the mooring of his body. The severed spine dangled obscenely from the neck. A thick fountain of gore and scarlet blood showered the boulder as his spasming body dropped hard to the dirt.

The skull continued to hover in the air. A flowing black body of bristling hair wavered behind the skull. The creature now appeared part Chauncey Walters and part writhing specter. It swam through the air and coasted beneath the bank of smoke. It descended and dropped down to the boulder. It hovered before each of the skulls in their respective nooks. 

โ€œAashayaan,โ€ The voice came out between the bloody jaws of Chaunceyโ€™s mouth. The tongue hung limply to the side and protruded between the lips.

The specter cascaded down to the prone body. A light gray steam rose from the manโ€™s back and bathed the creature. It shook and trembled in delight as it had been eons since it had fed. 

It was hungry for more.ย 


I hope you enjoyed my story so far. We even have plans already for a sequel edition scheduled later in the year. Would love to hear your thoughts on the story… Leave me a comment.โ€‚Till then, happy reading!