The Deity Staff – Sneak Peek — Derek Barton – 2023

I am hard at work on The Deity Staff. Sorry that I have neglected you!

Here you go. A little sneak peek!!


It actually took her two days to find a lead for Rivyen. Broenef Cros’seau was the first name on his list and the only one De’Embra gained a bit of insight into.

The man was a nephew to Duke Bareth Cros’seau. He had been living with his mother in a farming village near the capital city, Keliada. The same time as the Cros’seau family had been found guilty and exiled, his mother had contracted a severe case of Fleve Virus and died. Having no other relatives, Broenef moved around to differing cities. Eventually, he took up residence in the crumbling Cros’seau mansion. For years, he maintained the estate on the volcanic Leibrec Isle. It had only come to light that the whole place had been deserted for an unknown amount of time.

Rivyen sat uncomfortablely atop Rashae, his black mare, and stared up at the weathered castle. As he studied the ancient, ruined home, he could not shake the feeling he was being watched and studied. The smoky glass windows of the structure resembled dead buglike eyes. Whoever or whatever might roam within remained unseen.

He dismounted and tied Rashae to a hitching post. If there was any way to find and track down this elusive Broenef he hoped he would find it inside.

The front door was not locked but due to inclement weather, the wood frame around it had swollen and sealed tight around it. He decided to walk the impressive grounds and see if there was another entry. Perhaps one of those cheerful windows, he thought to himself.

Near the back eastern wing, he discovered a cellar door which had started to rot. After a few good kicks, the lock gave way. Inside, it was thick with cobwebs and dust piles but nonetheless empty. It did have one set of dilapidated steps leading to another door. His luck had turned and this door was unlocked.

Upon entering however, he was immediately blinded by a bright, orange glare. He fumbled about at the top of the steps, grabbing onto a thin counter to keep his balance. His vision finally cleared, but there was no sign of what had caused the light.

He listened carefully but sensed no other movement or noise.

Rivyen paused at the end of the counter as he noted a tan, stained paper discarded in a trash bin. He unfolded it. The stains were actually lands made upon a map. He did not immediately recognize the area. Alert a few moments he determined it was an old rendering of the Ramanon region. Someone had made handwritten notes and even penciled two letters BK on the edge of one border of the Risa continent.

He folded the map back together and stuffed it inside his pack for later review. Then he closed the cellar door and crossed to a large chamber. It was once a formal dining room he guessed.

Near the center of a table rested an empty wood tray next to a tall glass vase. Wilted flowers and stems sat inside the old stemware. An obvious centerpiece at one time. Dust covered everything as expected, but Rivyen’s eyes fell upon a square shaped print on the tray. It had a barely noticeable layer of dust.

Something was missing. It had been there next to that vase and now it has been removed. It was likely an art piece. He twisted about, slowly scanning the rest of the formal chamber.

Other art from the wall and some from a shelf were taken — he could see more dust impressions. And another sculpture was likely missing. Were the works valuable or were there some personal attachment, he wondered. 

Perhaps if I track down the items, I could—

A fist shot out and rocked his head back to the left. Another followed up, bowling him over as it caught him in the stomach.

Before anything else could happen, Rivyen’s reflexes kicked in  and he dove to the side. He tumbled into a roll, sprung to his feet to face two black and red clad figures. Beleardea!

He caught the dwindling signs of an electrical force wavering in the air behind them. A Gate Spell has been used to drop the Beleardea assassins in unseen. That orange glare upon entering must have been some sort of magical alarm ward. He was foolish to have ignored it. Now he would pay the price for it.

His hand shot to his belt and unsheathed his long sword. The golden bracers he wore lent him an advantage of unnatural speed and he swung the sword point back and forth before him.

“That was quite rude. You did not even say your names and introduce yourselves,” he taunted.

The men before him backed up and spread their legs and arms  into fighting stances. They moved with cat-like grace and remained silent. Each held a dagger in one hand and a companion three-prong clawed Ramseur in the other.

“As you insist!” He thrust in a feint with his sword at the left assassin while slinging with his right hand a small grappling hook hidden inside one sleeve of his robe. The magically-enhanced throw caught the man off guard and snared around his boot.

Rivyen yanked the man off his feet and without mercy violently plunged the sword tip into his exposed throat. Blood fountained up his leg and over his boots.

The surviving assassin backed warily away. “Yevvik coy Hesh maya napa Liss!” The voice was high-pitched, angry, and very feminine. Rivyen had assumed wrong, he realized.

“Now that it is a fair dance, we can take our time to enjoy the music, m’lady.”

She shifted to the left putting the edge of the table between them. Taking her own advantage, she sprang toward a dark chamber attached to the dining room. He chased after her, unwilling to let her escape. As the assassin entered she easily darted up a bare wall and flipped up and behind him.

It had been another clever ploy. Now he was trapped in a room with no obvious exits. She stood poised in the arch of the doorway.

To Rivyen, the best defense was offense. He swept his blade low but rose toward her chest while spinning in to thrust his elbow into her face. She parried the sword easily with her hand claw, securing it between two tines while ducking his elbow jab.

He was impressed and a little worried at her obvious combat prowess.

Continuing his spin, he twisted away and tried the grappling hook again. Aware of it, she easily leaped over it and scoffed at his attempt.

He shrugged, then reset his feet. She abruptly gave up her post at the door and charged him. She slid on her knees as he swung for her again. Looking up into his face, she thrust one dagger’s pommel into his left knee while the other fist came up to fling a purplish powder into his dumbfounded face.

Sputtering the dust from his mouth and lips, he stumbled, now blind. He was in dire straits now. He swung his sword in short swipes trying to keep her at bay stalling while his eyes cleared. He heard movement to his left, but it did not sound like an attack. A hard kick to his hand knocked the blade to the floor. He wanted to retreat but being blind, he had no idea where he would escape.

“Re tad Tass mia mo desc el?” She said but her words were incomprehensible.

His vision would not clear. Through a blur he could only make out some shapes and shadows. The metallic taste in his mouth scared him. Was he drugged, poisoned?

He heard her step forward and pick up his weapon from the floor. She intended on killing him with his own sword!

Having no choice, he clasped his hand on a silvery green medallion at his neck. He muttered the invoking command, “Pre’ema Delta Los!”

A hot flash of heat erupted from the magical charm. The small room bottled the spell’s effect and intensified the explosion. It rocked the assassin off her feet and threw her from the room back into the shady dining area. He heard her hit several chairs and the glass vase shatter in a thousand pieces across the floor.

Flames bloomed upon parts of the walls and doors. Smoke began to fill the chamber.

Her fuzzy shadow now wreathed in green flames streaked back across the chamber and into the kitchen. She was going to escape through the cellar as he had come in. He shook his head. It bothered him to let the assassin run, but he was still in no condition to stop her.

****

Standing again next to Rashae, he caught his breath. His vision had slowly adjusted to normal.

The fire inside was starting to intensify. The castle would be gutted within the hour. He hoped he had not missed any leads of import.

He opened his robe and rummaged in one hidden fold. Inside the tunic of the male assassin, he had found in a pocket a small leather journal. These two had already been ransacking the castle before his arrival.

Now he took time to examine it. On its cover of the book was the Cros’seau Family Crest. Inside were some written passages and dates. However, the majority of the book was blank.

Within one entry, he focused on a curious name. A young cousin Broenef mentioned that lived in Ramanon.

A Brielle Kess…

My Top Sellers — Derek Barton – 2023

I am working hard on book #16, The Deity Staff. My collection has certainly grown especially during this last year or so.

So, I thought it would be a good idea to highlight my top sellers (most popular) books, share what they are about and give you an honest review from Amazon. Some of you may not have known about these or just know of the titles and not the story.

ELUDE:

A young ex-con, Vicente Vargas, must outrun the police and the real killer framing him for a series of gruesome murders in Phoenix, Arizona. With his reputation tarnished and no support, he must fight to clear his name and survive the dangerous streets.

4.6 stars 23 reviews

Great crime/horror novels! This little book packs a wallop in its 110 pages. It also establishes Derek Barton as a mystery/crime/horror writer. I’m so glad I found it, and so will you.

Two seemingly unrelated incidents converge towards the end. A 20 year old boy, a juvie graduate, is struggling to support his younger sister’s dream and reverse her opinion of his character. A tween living with her father and bed-ridden grandma since her mom died in a car accident is linked to their paid caretaker’s apparent traffic suicide. Barton is a skilled writer who develops his characters seamlessly around the plot; a plot which will glue the reader to the story until a “to be continued” announcement on page 110 makes him groan in exasperation. You know nothing will keep that reader or this reviewer from getting the sequel.Well played, Mr. Barton, well played! Five Stars.

CONSEQUENCES WITHIN CHAOS:

An untested sorcerer prince, Taihven, must wield untapped powers from the Chaos Realm to save his city, Wyvernshield, from a massive beastly horde and discover their true enemy from the past to fulfill his destiny as the much-needed king.

4.8 stars and 15 reviews

Author Derek Barton has created an amazing world with vibrant colors and characters. Scratch that, he has created layers of worlds that vary with colors, textures, sounds, and smells that make me wish I could spend a day or two exploring them (with a safe guide, of course).

The characters invoke strong emotions right from opening. I felt hate, love, terror and remorse, it is a roller coaster. I don’t think I’ve ever smelled a setting while I was reading, but Mr. Barton does such a great job triggering imagination with his writing that I found myself wrinkling my nose as if the smells were all around me.

I have read through this book at least a half dozen times and recently purchased it for my Kindle so it is easier to carry around. If you enjoy fantasy fiction, I highly recommend reading this book.

I can’t wait for the next!

EVADE:

Detective Lindsey Korrey faces a perilous chase after a police car incident, becoming the guardian of a missing child pursued by sinister forces. Battling supernatural enemies and unearthing dangerous secrets, Lindsey’s thrilling journey captivates with suspense and pulse-pounding revelations.

4.7 stars 21 reviews

A heart-pounding adventure….twists and turns galore.

‘Evade, Part One’ by Derek Barton is the sequel to his 2017 novella ‘In Four Days’. This installment is filled with action, suspense and twist and turns enough to give one literary whiplash. With an array of some very memorable characters and a most creative plot, this short read will have you entertained and asking for more. Good things do indeed come in small packages. Derek breathes life into his characters and takes his readers along for a rapidly palpitating escapade in a cat-and-mouse adventure with the supernatural. A fun and entertaining read. Looking forward to the next installment.

THE HIDDEN:

Nate and Zelda Malone’s windfall leads them to a vast farm near Hoosier National Forest. However, a nightmarish presence lurking on their land threatens to literally tear them apart. Together, they must confront an ancient and malevolent creature that endangers not just their lives but all of humanity, testing their limits and forcing them to make unimaginable sacrifices to survive.

8 reviews 5 stars

Atmospheric and intense! This is a very well-written novel. It is dark and sometimes disturbing, with great character development. The tension builds for the reader with the setting almost becoming a character itself in that it greatly influences the story and people and is almost as frightening as the wolves themselves. The werewolf legend is artfully advanced by this fine novel.

THE BLEEDING CROWN:

The spirited Princess Letandra is abducted by her family’s rivals, leaving her stranded in a foreign land. As she faces unexpected trials and sadistic captors, she must risk everything to escape and warn her brother, King Taihven, of the impending war that threatens not just his kingdom, but the fate of all.

12 reviews 4.5 stars

I can’t wait to see what happens next! This book is even better than it’s predecessor.
It is layered with fascinating characters. The heroes are truly heroic, while remaining human and believable, and the villians are truly evil. It spans different worlds where the action keeps you breathlessly turning page after well-written page.

For those who loved the Wyvernshield stories, Pawns & Pieces has continued the story line. It was great to explore both worlds of Tayneva and Aberrisc again!

Please do not let these stories slip by you! You can still pick them up on Amazon, Kindle and on Audible!

New Release! — Pawns & Pieces – Derek Barton 2023

Ready for you, ready to thrill and take you deep into the darken lands of Tayneva!

Shrouded in secrecy, the aftermath of the Battle at Adventdawn lingers, concealed behind the impenetrable veil of the Barrier of Storms. The City of Wyvernshield, now under the iron-fisted rule of the new Ebon Queen, becomes the epicenter of a harrowing campaign fueled by relentless conquest and unspeakable terror.


Meanwhile, the sinister forces of the Beleardea Blood Cult, her treacherous allies, run amok, spreading their malevolence unchecked. In this clandestine struggle, the valiant Khestal Ezan Order must operate from the shadows, their every move cloaked in secrecy.


Can the survivors—LLasher, Scars, and Ama’yen—discover a path to redemption, driven by an unwavering determination to make a difference?


As a newfound glimmer of hope pierces the darkness, Taliah the Seeress unveils a sudden revelation. A beacon of light that reignites their efforts, leading them to a possible key to unlock Princess Letandra from the clutches of The Bleeding Crown.

Prepare to embark on an electrifying journey through the gripping pages of PAWNS & PIECES! With every turn, follow the tantalizing clues and cryptic signs that lead deeper into a treacherous Game of Devastation that looms ominously over all. Grab your copy now! The stakes have never been higher!

Now on sale on Kindle and Amazon (Audible version coming soon!) CLICK HERE

AI Interview #2 — Derek Barton – 2023

As I promised, here is the second interview to give you a little more insight to me, my writing and who I am. Enjoy!

Where were you born?

In Warsaw… Warsaw, Indiana, that is. LOL. For those curious, it’s near Fort Wayne, Indiana.

What was your dream job when you were a child?

Originally I wanted to be an actor then that changed to an artist. Neither one panned out, but at least I did find a way to be creative.

What is your proudest achievement so far?

Of course there are two obvious answers here: one, my daughter and building a home for my family. Two, being a writer of not one but 15 novels! Seriously doubted I could be prolific enough and organized to write one coherent novel. 

What is your favorite book and why? 

Stephen King’s The Stand. The cast of complex characters coming from all parts of the country to fight in an epic struggle against evil was mind-blowing as well as inspiring.

What is your favorite movie and why?

This will surprise most of you, but it isn’t horror, but sci-fi. The Matrix is probably one of the most unique and exhilarating films I have ever seen. 

What is the best trip you’ve ever taken?

My father and I went for two weeks when I was in my early teens, camping in various spots all through Michigan until we got to an isolated island called Isle Royale. It was very remote with no technology allowed. I saw a moose in the wild, heard wolves howling and for the first time, there were no sounds other than nature. No cars, planes, trains or city noise. Complete silence. Amazing experience.

What is your favorite hobby or pastime?

I am very addicted to a Virtual Reality video game called In Death Unchained. If there were any way to make a living doing it professionally I would! LOL. It is an awesome archery game. I have been a gamer for most of my life. This game hands down is the most engaging and exciting.

What is your biggest fear?

Losing anyone in my family would be devastating, but having another stroke or something similar would be more than I could ever take on again.

What is one thing you’ve always wanted to learn but haven’t yet?

A couple of things: I would love to go on a cruise once. The other activity would be to go bungee jumping at least once in my life. 

What is your favorite cuisine?

Normal week to week favorite meals would be Chinese food or steak. For special times or on vacation, it would have to be Snow Crab Legs.

What is your favorite music genre or artist?

I am into heavier music like Godsmack, Avenged Sevenfold and Linkin Park.

What is your favorite season and why?

I love consistent weather so I love summer. Now it does get pretty hot here in Arizona, but I don’t miss the other seasons. I lived long enough in Indiana to have my fair share of rain and snow. I am so done with that!

What is your favorite childhood game or toy?

I am dating myself here but I have to say, it was the Atari. I love video games, especially the old standup arcades. Having a game console at home was amazing. Thus, I have always had one since the Atari. 

What is the most adventurous thing you’ve ever done?

I guess you could call it adventurous, but when I was 26, I decided I had to forge a new life for myself. After saving a bit of money, I moved to Phoenix–no job, no house/apartment and no family or friends. I moved here for the weather and to find myself. It took a lot of hard work to get established but I don’t regret it. Sometimes you just know when you have to make a hard change in order to grow.

What is your favorite fictional character and why?

One character which has always stolen my attention every time is the drow elf character called Drizzt Do’Urden created by R.A. Salvatore. Just a great fantasy character with a hero mindset and a misunderstood darkness about him. A “Batman”-esque dark hero. 

What is your favorite sport or physical activity?

Well, since my stroke I really haven’t been physical, but in the past, it was racquetball, tennis, pickleball or hiking. Perhaps I can rekindle my hiking at least. I do miss being in nature!

What is your dream travel destination?

I would love to see Australia at least once. Or maybe if given the opportunity, I would go see Scotland. 

What is your favorite holiday and why?

Halloween by far is my favorite. Just love the fun of it. As a kid, I was all about the costumes and the candy. My daughter shares that same love. Last year for the first time since my 20s I wasn’t able to dress so this year I guess I am going to have to make up for it! (pardon the pun.)

What is your favorite type of animal?

Although lions are really high on the list, I will never stop watching shark shows — I am a fanatic with Shark Week and I search out videos on YouTube about them. I love the videos and learning about them, but you’ll never catch me diving in the ocean. I have no interest in being up close to the actual animals.

What is your favorite type of music instrument?

I love the saxophone and actually played one in my Middleschool years. I am also a big fan of pianos – one day maybe I’ll push myself to learn to play.  

What is your favorite type of dessert?

I am a bigtime brownie aficionado. If that’s not available, then something with bananas will always work for me. And yes, yes I do take fan desert gifts! I am not so proud to turn them down. ha!

What are your top five favorite television shows?

Tough question but right now I would say 1# Game of Thrones (except last season!), 2# Dexter, 3# Lost, #4 Better Call Saul, and #5 Breaking Bad.

Video Interviews on Book Asylum — Derek Barton – 2023

I had the honor and pleasure to go on two Vodcast channels! The first with The Written Undead Podcast in October. Then after Written Undead became the new Book Asylum Podcast, they had me on again this month!

Jack Childress and Angel Ramon, the hosts of the podcast channels have also graciously accepted my invitation to write for my With Malice Magazine! They are working currently on stories for our 2nd issue due out in June!!

I may have another podcast coming up with another channel this April.

Here are the links to the channels for your viewing pleasure!

The WRITTEN UNDEAD PODCAST


The BOOK ASYLUM PODCAST

ENJOY!

THE FLIGHT OF THE DIRITHI – NOW ON SALE!! — Derek Barton – 2023

…A world where the vilest creatures came to roost. In the past, even her mother, always so brave, wouldn’t dare to utter its name. This was a world where even the snow fell black…

For Jueneva Enmaya, her father’s tales of an ancient land filled with creatures both terrifying and magical were ones of fear, not wonder.  After learning she is one of the fabled Dirithi, half-dragon kin, she is forced to uncover her own heritage and links to the harsh land of Akkei Maliss. She will find an inner strength she never knew she had. 

What would seem to others, a terrible and tragic end, Jueneva Enmaya rejects defeat, facing her challenges!

Among the ashes of a world forgotten after the Night of Sorrow & Slaughter, Jueneva begins her epic quest to reclaim what was lost and restore the truth of the Five Blackened Realms. Armed with newfound powers and new allies, she will forge a new life. Brave a never-ending onslaught of ferocious beasts to become the heroine and the hope of this shattered land. 

STAND WITH JUENEVA, share in her adventures—BUY your copy today!!

I am super excited to bring you this dark fantasy tale! I love writing, but this story not only was thrilling to write but fun and moving to me as a writer/reader as well.

ENJOY!!

FRESH STORY CONTENT 2/21/2023 — Derek Barton — Wyvernshield!!

The clouds overhead had not broken as predicted. The storm grew stronger throughout the day as Ama’yen’s party traveled away from the coast’s beaches. Rain drizzled and spat on them in flurries but nothing substantial. It was like the storm was taunting them for its own perverse sense of humor. The party’s spirits waned and grew dark as well. Damp hair, feathers, and fur under soggy clothes weighed upon them as much as the seriousness of the quest.

Rivyen and the Private Sloan took the lead and scouted a bit ahead while Lyndasia stayed next to Ama’yen. The other three ex-guardsmen were on the perimeter while Scars trailed behind them all.

Lyndasia leaned over and pulled the reins closer to Ama’yen’s hands. “It will help with the control if you hold them snug but not tight. The horse will sense the direction you want them to go in easier.”

“Oh.” The Yuul looked nervously down at the back of the animal’s head.

“You are not too familiar with horses, I take it?”

“Uh. No. I mean, they roam in the grass plains of our land too, but I was usually taken by cart. I guess I had a privileged upbringing.” She laughed.

“If I think of any other tips I will let you know.” Lyndasia smiled warmly at her.

Several hours later they broke through the tree line, spotting the raging waters of the Nestermaryn River. They grouped together to discuss their options. A rickety wooden bridge rose up and over it in a long arch. It’s condition damaged by the raging storms in the region. Several planks were missing in the middle. The horses were eyeing it, anxious about crossing.

“We are going to have to go in a line. The horses are too broad to go side by side,” Scars advised.

“You think it is safe though, right?” Ama’yen asked, concerned by the bridge’s rough appearance.

Rivyen twisted in his saddle and scanned the length of the construct. “She has taken a beating and could use a little care but I would say she can hold us.”

Rivyen waved for the accompanying soldiers to join the four of them. When they gathered about him, he gave them instructions. “I want the three of you to lead while the two of you to join me in the back. Scars will ride in front and the women in the center. Everyone clear?”

Overhead, the storm flurries erupted and rain pelted them with a vengeance. “Hurry!” Lyndasia exclaimed, pulling a yellow hood over her head.

As they prodded the horses in line onto the bridge, lightning and thunder rumbled over the entire valley.

“We will have to find a shelter on the other side. We cannot travel in this weather,” shouted Rivyen.

Scars nodded. “Agreed. Two of us can scout, one north and one south.”

The first of arrows came out of thin air and struck the lead soldier’s horse in the left shoulder. The poor animal bucked in sudden panic and pain, the rider was flung backwards. He landed hard on his right shoulder then rolled off the bridge.

More arrows came buzzing past like angry bees or were striking into the boards of the bridge. The party was neatly trapped in the middle of the bridge. More arrows were coming from the thick shrubs along both sides of the river.

“The Beleardea! They have found us!!” screamed Lyndasia.

The wounded horse leaped back and forth still terrorized. Scars bolted from his own mount and tried to grab the beast’s reins. From below, hanging from the side, the horse’s rider called out to him as he clung to a post. “Help me! Help!”

Another soldier jumped off his horse. “Get him, leave the horse to me.”

Scars knelt down as the other man snagged the reins and tried to calm the animal. He steered it closer to one side.

“MAKE FOR THE OTHER SIDE! CHARGE PAST THEM!” Rivyen commanded.

As one, the rest of the party leaned in close to their horses and surged forward down the remaining length. However, on the other side, men in black wrappings emerged from the thick scrub bush on the opposite side and poured out onto the bridge . They wore red hoods that covered their heads and faces . They had black scimitars in hand.

Lyndasia somersaulted off her horse and landed in a roll. Her serrated daggers were in hand as the hooded men approached her.

A silver-tipped arrow caught one of the hooded men dead center in the face. Rivyen targeted another man and took him down before he made another step toward Lyndasia.

Muffled thumps from heavy boots alerted the Yuul. Ama’yen hauled roughly on her reins, stopping her charge. She moved around in her saddle to face the rush of warriors coming from behind them. Waving her hands back and forth in unique movements, she gathered her magical energies.

A blast of red stars shot from the Sorceress’ hands, ripping two more hooded men off their feet and into the river. The two ex-Wyvernguard with Rivyen ran ahead and engaged the assassins charging Lyndasia.

A scream came as two arrows peppered the man with the wounded horse. He collapsed in a heap under its feet.

Scars shouted to the frantic man holding on to the bridge’s post. “Take my hand! Come on, hurry!”

“I am slipping! I…I…Grab me!”

Ama’yen screamed as she grappled with two of the hooded men who were trying to pull her off her horse.

“Please, Scars! You have to grab me first. I cannot let the post go or I will fall i–“

“–Take my hand now! Do it!” Scars screamed in anger.

Three men had gotten past the ex-Wyvernguard and were trying to corner Lyndasia. She outmaneuvered them and jumped to the bridge railing to get the “higher-ground advantage” on her attackers. One of them made a grab for her legs, but yelped as she scored a blade strike along his neck and shoulder.

Rivyen fired again, taking one down with a shot to his thigh, but his next arrow flew past. The last man took advantage, lunged forward and impaled her threw the hip. Her scream pierced the valley and echoed louder than the thunderclaps of the storm.

Ama’yen’s scream followed Lyndasia’s as she was pulled free of her saddle.

Scars looked the man in the eyes, shook his head and stood back on his feet. He raced to help the desperate mage. The Flohki removed his broadsword and charged the men wrestling with Ama’yen.

The first man fell hard as Scars’ blade took off his left leg cleanly. The sword continued its arch and embedded in the side of the man next to him. Before the man reacted, Scars whirled around to plunge a dagger held in his right hand into the man’s neck. Blood exploded from the man’s mouth and sprayed over the remaining hooded man and the sorceress.

He leaped at Scars and plowed him backwards. They rolled along the ground, pummeling each other.

Suddenly the hooded man was lifted off Scars as Rivyen swept him up in arms and threw the man over the railing.

“GET ON YOUR HORSES! WE HAVE TO GET HER HELP!” The man screamed. Behind him, barely able to keep herself on the saddle, Lyndasia held onto the scimitar which was still in her side. She was shaking and visibly pale.

Scars leaped to his feet and glanced back down the bridge. He saw only the wounded horse and bodies laid sprawled on the wood. No one remained clinging to the post.

FRESH STORY CONTENT 2/7/2023 — Derek Barton — Wyvernshield!!

In the gray light of the predawn hours, Tal had the reins of the last two horses that were being used by Ama’yen’s party leaving for Aberrisc. He guided them onto the wooden platform leading from the pier to the wooden skiff. They resisted and shied away from the rocking of the boat, but he coaxed and cooed to calm them down. He tied them to the railing with the others and walked back to the pier.

Standing next to Ama’yen and Scars stood a cluster of hired soldiers who would be their escort on the mainland. The men had similar uniforms — dark clothes, leather coats and swords scabbarded at their sides. It was obvious they still considered themselves Wyvernguards in spite of the disbandment of the City Guard over a year ago. They talked amongst themselves, keeping aloof from the strange humanoids.

Some of the outside braziers had been lit along the dock. Plumes of thick fog surrounded the beach head and blanketed everything in a thick haze. A summer storm had developed earlier and the remnants still harassed their island. It would also not make for a smooth trip to shore, but he wanted them to start as soon as possible on their mission. He had to know if this prophecy was legitimate and if they were finally on the right track.

High winds from the sea buffeted Rivyen and Lyndasia as they exited together through the Compound’s doors. They held hands as they approached. The couple had stopped trying to hide their relationship as before. He was happy for them, but not sure their bond would last due to Rivyen’s heritage and his obsessive pursuit of power. Time would tell.

“Good morn,” Tal greeted them.

“It is such an ugly hour. I hope the horses make the trip.” Rivyen grumbled.

Lyndasia bumped her shoulder into him. “Pay no mind to the grouch, Master Tal. I, for one, am excited about this trip. It is about time we make some progress!”

“Yes, yes. That was what you reasoned as your excuse to disobey my specific instructions and helped LLasher raid the slave quarry. Correct? Rush blindly forward. We needed to make progress.” He scolded, but the tone was not harsh as the words.

She averted her eyes as Rivyen stepped in. “Where is LLasher anyway? We need to get going in case this storm worsens after all.”

“I have not informed LLasher about the Seyde. He will not be joining you.  And…I have decided to give him some other objectives.”

Rivyen nodded. “So, you are punishing him as well for his raid, you mean.”

“Punishment is for wrong doing. He did something right. However, he did not do it with the right intentions or the right methods. I need level-headed leaders, not emotional children in our battle with the Beleardea and The Bleeding Crown.” This time his tone had grown terse and in volume.

The wind picked up and howled . It broke the tension and Lyndasia jumped at a change in topic. “Do you really think she knows where this Mescarne place is? Lei Lines that only she can sense and follow…Seems rather insane.”

Rivyen scoffed. “No more insane than a silver crown that attacks and controls a person for over a year. Or not more insane than the idea of a half-human, half-bird male fighting alongside a half-cat, half-woman. All has come to existence, yet we would not have believed these ideas a year or two ago.” 

“I do believe she will find the Lei Lines and lead us to our answers. She has proven herself of good heart and she has a stake in this as well. If she can get back to Aberrisc, she can see her twin brothers, her only family.” Tal stated.

One of the soldiers, stout and stone-faced, marched over to the  group. He had black, wet hair and a patchy beard. “The first rays are soon to come, sir, uh, Master Crowan. If you want to go under the cover of darkness and fog, we should set sail now.”

“Thank you, Private Sloan. I will follow your judgment. You may leave at your discretion after your men place the last load of supplies. Please be sure that your men keep a vigilant eye out for Quietus spies and patrols along the main roads. The Ebon Queen has made provisions. No doubt she has also employed the resources of the Beleardea too. If possible avoid major cities and trade routes.  Also I will double your payment if you ensure that what may occur or seen on this journey stay with your men.  They cannot confide with anyone what you encounter. Can I count on your seeing to that?”

“Indeed. The payment will seal it, but these men have nothing to call theirs after losing their city appointments. They will not have time or inclination to gossip.”  Sloan answered.

“Then I bid everyone good-bye and productive hunting,” he stopped and faced Rivyen. “Get word back to me as soon as you get any confirmation for Taliah’s Prophecy.”

****

A light rap on Tal’s chamber door announced a surprise visitor. “One second while I finish.” 

There was no answer back.

He focused back on the pages of prophecy then penned some notes next name he dissected from the passages. 

Who were these people and why were they chosen? Are the Gods involved or does fate move all of us as pawns in a game of chance and death?

The knuckle rap again.  

“Yes, come now.”

It opened and LLasher rushed in, his lips pressed tight. The man was beat red from restraint.

“You are earlier than I expected. Good morn.”

“Master Tal, is it true that Rivyen and the others have gone somewhere during the storm? Why? Where?”

“Please relax. Sit and we can discuss this,” he chided the Camiyaan, pointing at the chair before Tal’s work desk.

LLasher sighed but relented. He sat with obvious impatience.

“Two nights ago, Seeress Taliah performed a ceremony called a Blood Seyde. It is an intense use of her visionary powers. With the help of the blood, she links to the other side and sometimes gets answers for us. The ritual was very productive…or at least it seems to have been. I spoke with Rivyen and the others in order to get them to start a search for positive confirmation that we are on the right path here–“

“–But you are not including me?”

“True. I have decided to redirect your energies in a different path to help with other questions that I need resolved.”

LLasher bolted to his feet. “NO! You are only keeping me back because I went against your decision about the quarry.  You are angry with me and this is some sort of…”

“Punishment?  Yes, in some ways I can understand how it could be construed as such.”

“I knew it!”

The Master kept his emotions in check as well as his voice. “However, I hope this is a period of growth and introspection.  LLasher, you are very capable of many things and actions. I see you having a powerful position here in the future.”

“You do not trust me, right?  You and Rivyen are constantly judging me and anything I say.”

“In order for us to stop The Bleeding Crown and to rescue Letandra, we have to hit back with a focused strike at their weaknesses. If you let your emotions and your own guilt keep spinning you in every direction like a child’s toy top, then you will never be fully useful to our cause.”

LLasher’s eyes widened and his jaw dropped.  He had no words to respond and sat back down in the chair.

“Take this time to delve into what has happened. Tear apart your memories, your actions and your history with Letandra and Taihven. Answer the burning questions inside that you feel — answer how you are to blame for what happened to them.  Give yourself the honest truth and prove once and for all why you are to blame.”

“So…you blame me too then?” he mumbled, facing to the side and not meeting Tal’s eyes.

“No. I do not personally blame you. No one in the Order blames you. None of us were there other than her friends and they do not blame you. In fact, the only person judging your every action is you. We cannot absolve you of this shame. But by freeing yourself of this supposed guilt, you can start making sound decisions and contributions here.  You are so set on proving yourself and getting her free, you threw away the lives of the two ex-Wyvernguard.  You risked our own plans getting back to the Ebon Queen in your rashness.  Then before I can deal with that, you convince yourself and Lyndasia to attack the slave quarry. That put your life and hers in serious jeopardy. What would have happened to you or her if either of you had been captured?  Do you really think you could have stopped The Bleeding Crown from finding out what we need and plan?”

He took a breath, folded his arms across chest and leaned back in his leather chair. LLasher bowed his head down and stared at the stub of his left arm. “She is still in there.”

“What?”

“Letandra is still inside. Yes, I see her actions and the atrocities, but she is fighting him…It. The day he killed Taihven and took her, she had a chance to kill us right then. But I saw it. I saw HER. A single tear escaped her eye and trailed down her cheek. She is in there and she knows she killed her own brother. I have to find a way to free her. I failed that day to–“

“–You were not alone and you did nothing wrong. You know this. Taihven did not know. Letandra and her friends did not know.  Even Chroyanne Cros’seau did not know. The Bleeding Crown fooled and used them all to get what it wanted. By accepting this mistake and learning from it, we can all move forward and take steps to stop it from escalating.”

“What if the only way to stop The Bleeding Crown will be to kill her? I cannot do it. You understand that right? I love her! I do not have it in me to kill her no matter the cost.”

Tal did sympathize with the man and he could understand the guilt, but he needed LLasher. The Order was small and being whittled down by the Ebon Queen’s efforts. “I am not asking for you to kill her.  I am asking you to help me find a way to end this and bring her out. Remember Taliah asked you before if you were willing to fight for her soul?  Has that answer changed?”

LLasher shook his head.

“Then take the time to find your answers and heal. Get yourself straight. I need you now and I need you free from these negative emotions that are dictating your decisions.”

The Camiyaan nodded, but did not answer. He crossed the chamber, leaving without answering or saying another word.

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Tal hesitated, his knuckles inches above the wooden door.  He did not want to give the pair false hope but at the same time, Taliah did have a prophetic vision of a possible connection to their homeland.  

I can only offer them the facts that were presented.  It will be up to them how they face it, whether to believe or doubt is really their individual right.

He straightened his shoulders, confident in his decision and how he would proceed. First, he rapped on Scars’ door. There was no reply or sound. It was approaching late evening, perhaps the Flohki retired for the night.

The door abruptly opened as if the halfman had been there all along. “Master Tal?” His voice was a smooth tenor. 

The half-seagull and half-man creature eyed him standing in the faint candlelight.  His white feathered head was marred by a scar lacing down the right-side and his beak broken off at the tip.  In striking contrast, his chest, arms and shoulders were a complex pattern of scars, thus how his name was inspired.  He had never talked about his past or how his injuries came about, only that he was a tested, military veteran for his kind. 

“Scars, I am sorry for the late hour, but would you mind joining me for an important discussion?”

He nodded and joined Tal immediately in the hallway. They walked silently together down the corridor.  The Flohki was not a talkative type, down-to-business and never hesitant to assist.  Master Tal liked him very much and appreciated the character he had. It was likely a part of the militant-upbringing of their kind, but there was added a quiet nobility about the creature.  He was proud, yet humbled and earnest. Sometimes, Tal even sensed a shadow of shame. 

Something behind his eyes shows me quiet courage and accepted guilt.  An odd pairing that bears learning more of one day.  Yet, he is not ready to reveal that. 

Bare light illuminates around Ama’yen’s door.  She was another half-man creature but also had a subtlety and grace about her.  Half-feline and half-woman. She was said to be a powerful sorceress in her home world of Aberrisc.  

Ama’yen came to the door, wrapped in a light yellow cloth, semi-transparent in the light from her room.  Her long black hair was swept over her slightly pointed ears and braided on one side.  A circlet of silver and emerald gems on her forehead brought out the majestic green of her feline eyes.  Tal was a bit thrown off by the sudden attractive creature standing before him and her attire did not necessarily mean she was retiring for the night.

“Uh…sorry, I do not mean to disturb you, but I have important information. I have learned of some points of interest for the two of you. Were you in the middle of something?”  He asked, averting his eyes carefully from the form beneath the yellow wrappings.

“Nothing of importance. May I fetch a robe first?  Are we going somewhere or do you wish to enter here?”  The Yuul woman asked.  There was no embarrassment in her voice.  

He tried to match that. “Once you are ready, could the three of us talk in your room?” 

She agreed and shut the door.  The pair of men waited again in silence in the hallway. The compound was quiet in the evenings and for the most part there were very few sounds echoing in the halls.

“Please come in.” The voice muffled by the door.

Ama’yen was now clothed in a gray and white robe with thick fur lining the edges. She swung the door open, welcoming them to enter her small but charming room. A lit fireplace warmed the chamber. She ushered them over to a wooden, round table that sat four in one corner.  On it, a historical tome was laid open before one chair.

“I was reading and studying a book from your downstairs library. It has maps of the continents surrounding Tayneva.  Fascin-cintaring.”  She stuttered on the last word.

Tal helped her with it. “Fascinating.”  He smiled, hoping she would understand he meant to help and not mock her.

“Ah. Thank you.”

“You are a quick learner and you have already developed a large vocabulary.”

She pulled out the two chairs for them before returning to her chair. 

Tal started. “Last night Taliah, our Blood Seeress, entered a Seyde. A Blood Seyde. It can be tricky and taxing on her physically, but we both felt it was a necessary gamble. We wanted to see if she could learn more information on what we can do to stop The Bleeding Crown. That artifact’s power has grown immensely and I feared we were running out of time.”

“Letandra may also be facing a dire outcome the longer it has control of her.  When The Bleeding Crown abandoned Chroyanne she disintegrated,” Scars interrupted.

Tal nodded in agreement. “Indeed. The Seyde proved me correct, we are in a race against time. However, it also revealed some incredible predictions to her. Per her vision, The Bleeding Crown is somehow preparing to call forth from the expanse of the In-Between, the Etohlosii. These are artifacts similar to The Bleeding Crown. They are imbued with the latent remains of an ancient eldritch god known as ARa Etohl. If the hosts owning the three other Etohlosii reach our plane and reunite with The Bleeding Crown, then ARa Etohl will be resurrected. This cannot happen or all life on every plane of existence will be extinguished.”

While Master Tal could not read the Flohki’s reactions well, he could see that his information had Ama’yen’s rapt attention.

“Several names were given to us through her vision in the Seyde.  These are individuals that will help us in one way or another rescue Letendre from The Bleeding Crown and stop her from reuniting the Etohlosii. We do not have all the details of who they are or where to find them yet, but she is confident of at least one name. Someone known as Khedarr of Aberrisc.”

Ama’yen gasped, her eyes bulged.

“How is that possible?” Scars blurted.

“We are not sure, but Taliah said that some of our answers lie in Aberrisc and with this person known as Khedarr.”

The Yuul stood, backed away from the table, shaking her head. “No! We are locked out. Cut off from our homelands!”

“Taliah was told that a key connection was to locate something known as Mescarne. Somehow and in some fashion, this Mescarne exists on all planes of the In-Between. If you find it, then you can cross over to any world at will.”

“That is why you come to us?” She stiffly faced the fireplace, her arms folded tight over her chest, trembling as if the fire was no longer capable of warming her.

“Yes. First I need you to think of how we — or perhaps the two of you — might locate this Mescarne. Second, if you can go back, you would have the best chance of finding–“

“–Khedarr is a necromancer!” Her words were low but hit Tal like a hammer.

“A MAGE OF DEATH?”

She nodded glumly. “He was ousted from our lands by my father for his tainted practices. However, we did contact him when LLasher was near death. His ungodly skills have greatly improved. I still do not condone his research into the forbidden sorceries of the dead.” Ama’yen looked back over her shoulder, locking eyes with Tal to judge his reaction to her words. 

Scars added, “He might even be dead by now. When we had to ask for his help with Mending LLasher.  He only agreed if we took him back to her homeland, the Fhey Ras Isles. The Quietus had his wife and children enslaved. Khedarr swore he was somehow going to rescue them.”

“When Chroyanne left, who assumed power until she returned?” Tal asked.

Scars shrugged. “However, in my opinion, in contrast to his questionable research, this Khedarr did seem of honorable intent. If Taliah has received credible knowledge from this prophecy, then I would not suspect it would send us to look for someone who was already dead, would it?” Scars asked Tal.

“It does not seem likely that it would. The whole thing is moot if we do not have a way to find Mescarne. Have either of you been to the Mescarne in your world?”

Both shook their heads.  Ama’yen said, “I have heard of the continent, but few have found their way there and even fewer return.”

They sat together, wrestling with the possibilities in their heads. 

“If I remember right,” Ama’yen started, then paused in thought. Finally she said, “I believe Letandra confided in me that Taihven believed he had been brought to Mescarne. One time in one of his episodes. Yes, in fact, I remember now that he had gone back and was able to speak somehow with his dead father!”

“Did he give you any details about the land?”

“I am trying to remember now. It has been some time. Sorry.”

She crossed back to the table but continued to stand, a finger tapping at her chin. 

“While I am not recalling any solid details, my knowledge of your language may be hampering me. He might have mentioned a temple.  A temple of stone at the heart of a desert. I think…” She tapped again at her chin with her finger. Tal noted that each painted and jeweled fingernail was filed to a sharp point.

“Yes, yes. I think I can.” Mostly she spoke to herself, but then she faced Master Tal. “If this temple and Mescarne are in each of the planes, my guess is that the Lei Lines all intersect there.”

“Lei Lines?” Scars asked before Tal could.

“Powerful waves of magical energies that crisscross every plane. In my world, I had an acute sense of them and their location. Perhaps it is due to my heritage, but in Aberrisc we studied and used the Lei Lines to increase our powers and spells. Here I definitely sense the Lei Lines but not as clear as when I was home. If we could track one of the major branches of Lei Lines, I trust it will take us to Mescarne.”

Scars studied the Yuul. “Do you have any sense of how far away they might be?”

She closed her eyes and placed her hands on the table. Her breathing went deep and slowed down into a rhythmic even pace.  A soft purring sound came from deep within her chest.

Moments later. “Several lines are near to us, but a major vein as I am wanting to follow is quite the distance away and…deep into Tayneva.”

Tal nodded. To be discovered or captured on the continent would mean arrest and possible execution since they were labeled traitors. As he considered the weight of the mission, Scars interrupted his inner debate. 

“When can we go, Master Tal?” Scars asked. 

“Would you and Ama’yen then agree to find the temple? I know I am asking much of you. It may mean possibly your lives or possibly the only way back to your families and kind.”

“This fight is ours as well. Not just for the fallen king, our friend and his sister, but for the expanse of the In-Between!”

“Alright. Gather your items and what you want with you for the trip…home. In the morning, I will have Master Rivyen and Lyndasia go with you. If we can validate that part of her prophecy then I have faith you will find Khedarr alive and with our answers on how we can save Letandra and stop The Bleeding Crown.”